Archana Garg Poet Light Verse

My Wish For You

Oh my precious,
I know that you know, how much I love you and 
You know that I know how much you love me.

Then where did you go, my dear?
I’m surprised you didn't have fear.
I know it was the nature’s call,
I know it was your right to fly.

May be you are searching me,
May be you are happy dear,
May be you intended my dear,
May be you flew by chance.

Whatever happened can’t be undone now,
All that I want to tell you now,
Just be brave my child, life’s not easy now,
Hunters are all around, stay alert and be safe, Sweetie.

I wish you get someone to love, 
I wish you fly the highest,
I know I’m the sinner, coz I kept you inside.
But I did what I felt best for you.

Forgive me my baby,
Fly high and reach the heights,
And someday if you see me down on earth,
Do not hesitate my dear, do not hesitate.

With love from Mumma

Dated : 8 Dec. 2014
9th place win in contest 'My Wish For You' 
Sponsored by Isaiah Zerbst
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2nd place win in 'I Love My Pets!' contest
Sponsored by: Laura Loo (2016)


*My little bird ( Mitthi meaning sweetie ) flew away on 3rd Dec. 2014. When I got her four and a half years back, she didn't know how to fly or even to hop. We used to jump in front of her and one day she too hopped and the journey continued…  She used to follow me from one room to another and she knew that food is in the kitchen .

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Poet Destroyer A February 3, 2016 at 11:48 PM thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 11:07 PM ARCHANA, Congratulations on your sweet Pet win. XOX ~LINDA~ Archana Garg February 1, 2016 at 8:00 AM Thank you so very much Poet for visiting.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 27, 2016 at 11:38 PM What a delightful write Archana ..Congrats on big win!! Archana Garg February 1, 2016 at 7:58 AM Thank you my dear Upma! I really appreciate your THE DEADLY SEVEN. You have done a marvellous job.

Skat A January 26, 2016 at 11:57 AM Archana Garg, CONGRATS ON YOUR LOVELY PET WIN. LOVE ** SKAT ** Archana Garg January 27, 2016 at 2:59 AM Thank you Skat A for your kind words.

Nette Onclaud January 26, 2016 at 1:26 AM another superb win.. congrats, archana..huggs Archana Garg January 27, 2016 at 3:01 AM Thanks for appreciation..

Beautiful Scars January 25, 2016 at 3:51 PM How saddening Archana..But I love the imagery in your story. Very good flow. Thank you for being a part of my contest...*smiles* -luloo Archana Garg January 27, 2016 at 3:07 AM thanks for visiting....smiles for you

Casarah Nance January 4, 2015 at 8:42 AM Wonderful winning write for by you, grats on your win and looking forward to many great writes from your pen :) Archana Garg January 6, 2015 at 3:49 AM Thanks Nance.

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2015 at 7:59 PM how sweet that you did yours on a bird. all god's creatures great and small are worthwhile subjects of poetry. I really like this one and am glad to see you got some congrats down here. It means you made the winners' list!! congrats. Archana Garg January 6, 2015 at 3:48 AM Thanks, Andrea.

Sandra Haight January 2, 2015 at 7:07 PM Yours is such an endearing poem, Archana. I know how you feel. When I was a young girl, my Mom nursed an abandoned baby red squirrel back to health. For over a year, he would go in and out of his cage, but always come back at night. Then, one day...gone. That is the way of nature, but we did miss him. We had named him Peter...Congratulations on your fine win in the contest! Sandra Archana Garg January 6, 2015 at 3:40 AM Great, I wish Peter had met a new friend to spend life with. Thanks for appreciation.

Kayod5 Kayode January 2, 2015 at 1:45 AM Thank goodness this my favourite poem made it to the top ,congrats Archana...huggs Archana Garg January 2, 2015 at 2:41 AM Thanks for stopping by my poem once again. Happy New Year.

Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2015 at 5:47 PM Archana, Congratulations -- This is a great way to start the new year. Enjoyed reading your winning poem. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Archana Garg January 2, 2015 at 2:40 AM Thanks Linda.

Rob Carmack January 1, 2015 at 12:55 PM What a beautiful poem. Like Jan, I liked the explanation at the end. It gives us some more insight and adds to the rereading of the poem. Congrats to you and Happy New Year. Archana Garg January 2, 2015 at 2:39 AM Thanks for your kind words and Happy new Year to you too..

Jan Allison January 1, 2015 at 12:08 PM what a tender poem and I love the explanation at the end - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx Archana Garg January 2, 2015 at 2:38 AM Thanks dear.

Kayod5 Kayode December 21, 2014 at 4:19 AM This is so superb , one of the few I really enjoyed,so natural and without any unnecessary"notice-me"; good work Archana ; a fav...huggs Archana Garg December 21, 2014 at 9:34 AM Thanks Kayode, for the appreciation.