My Winter, Your Summer

the snow undissolved amid my heart wanders eternal as does my avidity its difficult to accept “to move on to forget” six feet yet unreachable how will this feeling melt my everything lost tomorrow ‘we’ wander, separate, absent as I hang by the blistering icicle I want to accept but never forget will a 'farewell' do me as to liberty my tears frozen yet sentiments warm let our memories perpetual we coexist as you’l love in summer and I will in winter * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
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Date: 5/28/2025 10:39:00 PM
Congratulations dear friend, this write is on 100 best new poems list! Three cheers dear poet!!!
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Reya Suri
Date: 5/30/2025 9:03:00 PM
Wow, I just realized!!! Thank you so much!!! That's amazing!
Date: 5/26/2025 10:34:00 AM
You preserve your words in your perpetual winter well. Your ascii snowflakes in little asterisks convey your emotions. Hard to live in the tundra, but scarcity makes your blossoms more beautiful. Thanks.
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Reya Suri
Date: 5/30/2025 9:04:00 PM
Awww, I love your analysis! I'm glad you recognized the *'s, and I appreciate the ending line :)) that's very thoughtful
Date: 5/24/2025 8:16:00 AM
Dear Reya, I adore the emotional and visual impact of your exquisite poem The ache of love lost is palpable in your rich, poignant imagery. Such a tender melancholy expressed, a deeply moving piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Reya Suri
Date: 5/30/2025 9:03:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! Your kind words have made my day, Susan :)
Date: 4/3/2025 11:46:00 AM
Awesome work on the winners' list. Back with congratulations on your win. Way to go. Sara K
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Reya Suri
Date: 4/3/2025 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara!!! I’m so glad I won :) xx
Date: 4/2/2025 7:36:00 PM
Creative write.Congratulations on your top win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Reya Suri
Date: 4/2/2025 8:24:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! Cheers <3
Date: 4/2/2025 5:29:00 PM
Your poem is literally, physically beautiful. I'm sure I've never said that before. I was as moved by the poem structure as I was by the poem. It's truly like looking at a lit Xmas tree in the snow. The words also compelled me and spoke to my emotions. Very nice poetry ... CayCay
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Reya Suri
Date: 4/2/2025 8:25:00 PM
Aww, thank you so much! This means so much to me. I love the way you interpreted it visually! I'm glad it's compelling, even if it's heartbreaking. Thank you CayCay <3
Date: 4/2/2025 10:38:00 AM
What a creative yet sad write with falling snow. Yes, tears like snow must fall. Have a wonderful/blessed Day writing away.............
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Reya Suri
Date: 4/2/2025 11:37:00 AM
Thank you!! It is quite poignant, though I’m glad you understood the falling snow!
Date: 4/2/2025 12:43:00 AM
This poem lit a light in my heart, and then broke it simultaneously. Your poetic voice is visceral, unique, and beautiful. I was greatly saddened by the lines "I want to accept but never forget" and "how will this feeling melt my everything lost tomorrow" It just hit me right in the chest. You are so talented, wow. Thank you for commenting on my poem, and thus introducing me to you and your poems. Faved. And I do hope you heal, and meet this person in heaven. Be Blessed, Hiba <3
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/2/2025 9:49:00 AM
Reya I am glad it is fictional, and honestly it just goes to show how empathetic you are to have written the feeling of losing a loved one to death without having experienced it! Love your writing style (and the format).
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Reya Suri
Date: 4/2/2025 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so much! You have no idea how much this means to me. I do try to expand on my poetic voice. Thank you for commenting on my poems! I myself feel blessed to read yours. This poem is fiction, and I have not lost anyone, but I am glad that it is sentimental! Thank you for your kind words <3 glad you loved this.
Date: 4/1/2025 3:28:00 AM
Wow, cool poem. This is great. I can feel it and see the snow with your design too :)
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Reya Suri
Date: 4/1/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you!!! I love the formatting too :3
Date: 3/31/2025 10:05:00 PM
Profound and feeling. Love how you made it look!
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Reya Suri
Date: 3/31/2025 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! The formatting was tough..
Date: 3/30/2025 11:07:00 PM
Reya, I like the falling snow - it seems to add to the feeling.
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Reya Suri
Date: 3/31/2025 7:43:00 PM
Thank you! I am so glad you caught that.
Date: 3/30/2025 5:56:00 AM
"six feet (under) yet unreachable." So sad to lose someone. Beautiful elegy with an interesting form
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Reya Suri
Date: 3/30/2025 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so much! Yep, I do love the form on this; and I'm glad you could decode that line :)
Date: 3/30/2025 4:55:00 AM
Reya, creative and descriptive writing. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Reya Suri
Date: 3/30/2025 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Sara! I'll be sure to share more!
Date: 3/29/2025 10:08:00 PM
This it sure is poetic and attractive!... Separation becomes them. Now they are 'Poetry in Motion.' ~ Gershon
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Reya Suri
Date: 3/29/2025 10:45:00 PM
Awhh, thank you so much! Separation does indeed become the state of people. That's what I wanted to portray, glad you said that :) thanks for the read!
Date: 3/29/2025 8:29:00 PM
This is deep. Opposites do attract. Omg you are so talented! I can’t write in this form! How creative! Thanks for sharing.
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Reya Suri
Date: 3/30/2025 12:29:00 PM
Heh, I don't believe that poetry can be "wrong." Even as the writer, I leave people to interpret my piece! I actually like it when they bring their own meaning to my work; makes me realize how much power poetry brings.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/30/2025 1:22:00 AM
Great poets cast lines that draw many fish with various mentalities. So I am wrong and you are right as the writer but the poem can be like a mirror. So you have inspired growth and introspection! Thanks dear poet!
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Reya Suri
Date: 3/29/2025 9:45:00 PM
aww, you're so sweet! I never thought about this piece that way. I wrote it with the intention of talking about the loss of a loved one; however, you've opened my eyes to a whole new meaning! Time to analyze my own poem, lmao (p.s. thank you for the follow! I followed you back, I'd love to see more of your amazing work!)
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