My Winter, Your Summer

the snow undissolved amid my heart wanders eternal as does my avidity its difficult to accept “to move on to forget” six feet yet unreachable how will this feeling melt my everything lost tomorrow ‘we’ wander, separate, absent as I hang by the blistering icicle I want to accept but never forget will a 'farewell' do me as to liberty my tears frozen yet sentiments warm let our memories perpetual we coexist as you’l love in summer and I will in winter * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
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mysore Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 10:39 PM
Congratulations dear friend, this write is on 100 best new poems list! Three cheers dear poet!!!
Suri Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:03 PM
Wow, I just realized!!! Thank you so much!!! That's amazing!
Xiang Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:34 AM
You preserve your words in your perpetual winter well. Your ascii snowflakes in little asterisks convey your emotions. Hard to live in the tundra, but scarcity makes your blossoms more beautiful. Thanks.
Suri Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Awww, I love your analysis! I'm glad you recognized the *'s, and I appreciate the ending line :)) that's very thoughtful
Ashley Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:16 AM
Dear Reya, I adore the emotional and visual impact of your exquisite poem The ache of love lost is palpable in your rich, poignant imagery. Such a tender melancholy expressed, a deeply moving piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Suri Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:03 PM
Thank you so much!!! Your kind words have made my day, Susan :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Awesome work on the winners' list. Back with congratulations on your win. Way to go. Sara K
Suri Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 11:53 AM
Thank you so much Sara!!! I’m so glad I won :) xx
mysore Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 7:36 PM
Creative write.Congratulations on your top win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Suri Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 8:24 PM
Thank you so much!!! Cheers <3
Godwin Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 5:29 PM
Your poem is literally, physically beautiful. I'm sure I've never said that before. I was as moved by the poem structure as I was by the poem. It's truly like looking at a lit Xmas tree in the snow. The words also compelled me and spoke to my emotions. Very nice poetry ... CayCay
Suri Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 8:25 PM
Aww, thank you so much! This means so much to me. I love the way you interpreted it visually! I'm glad it's compelling, even if it's heartbreaking. Thank you CayCay <3
Goldsmith Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 10:38 AM
What a creative yet sad write with falling snow. Yes, tears like snow must fall. Have a wonderful/blessed Day writing away.............
Suri Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Thank you!! It is quite poignant, though I’m glad you understood the falling snow!
Junaid Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 12:43 AM
This poem lit a light in my heart, and then broke it simultaneously. Your poetic voice is visceral, unique, and beautiful. I was greatly saddened by the lines "I want to accept but never forget" and "how will this feeling melt my everything lost tomorrow" It just hit me right in the chest. You are so talented, wow. Thank you for commenting on my poem, and thus introducing me to you and your poems. Faved. And I do hope you heal, and meet this person in heaven. Be Blessed, Hiba <3
Junaid Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 9:49 AM
Reya I am glad it is fictional, and honestly it just goes to show how empathetic you are to have written the feeling of losing a loved one to death without having experienced it! Love your writing style (and the format).
Suri Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 8:37 AM
Thank you so much! You have no idea how much this means to me. I do try to expand on my poetic voice. Thank you for commenting on my poems! I myself feel blessed to read yours. This poem is fiction, and I have not lost anyone, but I am glad that it is sentimental! Thank you for your kind words <3 glad you loved this.
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 3:28 AM
Wow, cool poem. This is great. I can feel it and see the snow with your design too :)
Suri Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 7:44 AM
Thank you!!! I love the formatting too :3
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 10:05 PM
Profound and feeling. Love how you made it look!
Suri Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 10:21 PM
Thank you Andrea! The formatting was tough..
Crandall Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 11:07 PM
Reya, I like the falling snow - it seems to add to the feeling.
Suri Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Thank you! I am so glad you caught that.
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 4:55 AM
Reya, creative and descriptive writing. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Suri Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Thank you Sara! I'll be sure to share more!
Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:08 PM
This it sure is poetic and attractive!... Separation becomes them. Now they are 'Poetry in Motion.' ~ Gershon
Suri Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:45 PM
Awhh, thank you so much! Separation does indeed become the state of people. That's what I wanted to portray, glad you said that :) thanks for the read!
Jones Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 8:29 PM
This is deep. Opposites do attract. Omg you are so talented! I can’t write in this form! How creative! Thanks for sharing.
Suri Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 12:29 PM
Heh, I don't believe that poetry can be "wrong." Even as the writer, I leave people to interpret my piece! I actually like it when they bring their own meaning to my work; makes me realize how much power poetry brings.
Jones Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 1:22 AM
Great poets cast lines that draw many fish with various mentalities. So I am wrong and you are right as the writer but the poem can be like a mirror. So you have inspired growth and introspection! Thanks dear poet!
Suri Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 9:45 PM
aww, you're so sweet! I never thought about this piece that way. I wrote it with the intention of talking about the loss of a loved one; however, you've opened my eyes to a whole new meaning! Time to analyze my own poem, lmao (p.s. thank you for the follow! I followed you back, I'd love to see more of your amazing work!)
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