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My Winter

O pass by for just a few ticks when the flame in the belly heats a light passion on tenebrous winter hours, gazing at cold vapor fade to burst new ones: I seize the ivory whirl of twigs bowing and bowed, of many a hill capped with icicles glazed by the frail redness of a moonlight pulsing here and there, not exactly how this breath would savor it… Yet , in my eastern zone, there is ambrosia in melancholy, for melancholy buoys all unresolved pining weightless beyond the speech of refection; this heart untamed from parental loss on a cruel frosty bite through this intermission, as tinseled snowflakes bathe my naked skin. A Viv Wigley Contest: My Winter 11/26/2017
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Date: 12/15/2017 9:24:00 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Nette - blessings to you, friend - this is gorgeous - love it! :-)
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Date: 12/3/2017 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations, nette on you win with a beautifully flowing poem.
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win nette, so well written, enjoyed. :))
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Date: 11/29/2017 2:52:00 AM
This is indeed a lovely piece, nette. Congrats on your placement in my contest. Viv x
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Date: 11/27/2017 4:32:00 PM
wow you take one there nette, wonderful poetry.
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Date: 11/27/2017 9:12:00 AM
Imagery at its finest, Nette:)
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Date: 11/27/2017 9:07:00 AM
Your really know how to pick the perfect words to create your own unique imagery... I love that last line!!!! That is poetry perfection...
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Date: 11/27/2017 5:23:00 AM
Oooh...I can feel the chill...great wintery write nette...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/27/2017 12:51:00 AM
Beautiful winter poem, we are having snow today, so nice outside!
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Date: 11/26/2017 5:32:00 PM
I love this verse descriptive and warm! A pleasant read, good luck in the contest. A winner for sure --James
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Date: 11/26/2017 2:33:00 PM
Here's to frost on your nose and a contest winning iced crown on your head. A beautiful depiction of Winter, nette!
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Date: 11/26/2017 1:22:00 PM
- .. brrrrr ... sounds really cold, Nette - A wonderful poem - Best wishes in the contest - I'm going up the mountain tomorrow ... a lot of snow - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2017 12:43:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in your winter--best for a win, nette!
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