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I prepared myself or so I thought for when the kids would leave home. But empty nest hits hard during the holidays. That first one was a doozy! 

 

My Winter

MY WINTER Prepared for this cold winter? Tree fronds hang their heads, flashing lights hang tight. Bowed and bollixed presents — depressed. The absence of a merry Spring — the empty nest. Emotions chill, shiver... Turtlenecks without hugs. The whiteout of snow — knees shovel the heavy load. Deleterious decorations, keepsakes of holiday romance — kids sledding and cutting cookies, hot chocolate and kindled laughter. Icicles cling like burs to my dendrites, stinging my eyes. Yet, jingle bells soon ring, with Nor’easter winds — grandchildren chill for a season. and with chattering teeth, I grin. 11/19/2017 Viv Wigley’s My Winter Contest
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Barden Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:29 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Kim - blessings to you, friend - this is wonderful, and so charming! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Thank you, Greg!
Pett Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim, so well written as usual. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Tha k you, Roy!
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November 29, 2017 at 10:45 AM
You seem to be enjoying it all and that's good. Well created winter images. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Thank you, Janis xx
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November 29, 2017 at 2:56 AM
Congrats on your placement, Kim, I love the slightly tempered hopeful ending, too. Viv x
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November 30, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Thank you, Viv! xx
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November 25, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Beautiful write. I cannot, at this point, imagine the holidays as an empty nester, but you've captured your emotions very well. I especially like the line "Tree fronds hang their heads". Very descriptive in few words. Good luck with your contest.
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November 25, 2017 at 5:07 PM
Thanks, Rhoda!
Michaels Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 9:01 AM
A captivating write, with a fairly sombre undertone! Good luck with the contest, Kim. Regards, John.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 3:37 PM
Thank you, John!
Swartz Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 6:09 PM
You captured the good and the bad of winter perfectly! A great poem Kim i truly enjoyed.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 9:44 PM
Thank you James!
La France Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Kim, you have penned a beauty. Winter can be a joyous time with Christmas and all but it can be a lonely time also. Best of luck in the contest !
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Thank you, Constance! Happy Thanksgiving!
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 12:25 AM
Kim this is AMAZING. A FAVE
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Andrea! xx
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 6:42 PM
A joyful depiction of winter--well written verses feel quite rhythmic --well executed poem--best for a win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:31 PM
Thanks Vijay!
Godwin Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 1:46 PM
I feel you! This is lovely, Kim. The imagery conveys the feel perfectly. All the best ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 1:47 PM
Thank you CayCay!
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