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My Winter

I wake up to the crispness of the air Nature is still Outside the snow has formed into perfectly shaped mounds The frost has framed the windows into decorative designs Branches sway in a rhythmic swirl There’s a stillness inside My grandma is preparing bouillon and hearty beef stew I look outside and catch the smiling rays of the sun dancing on the snow banks Trees scrape the sky as they stand like an army line receiving its orders There’s a comfort and familiarity in the air as the day is beckoning to start The day smiles Winds sway in unison moving to the undulating rhythm of the atmosphere I marvel at the tranquil scene as I immerse myself in a novel The story takes me away to a far-away destination I feel safe and content as I wrap myself in a cushion of comfort I am at peace….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/15/2017 9:24:00 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Alona - blessings to you, friend! :-)
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Alona, great imagery, really like- I look outside and catch the smiling rays of the sun dancing on the snow banks, brilliant. :))
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Alona Perlin
Date: 12/1/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much. Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me!!
Date: 11/29/2017 2:15:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest, Alona, a lovely write. Viv x
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Date: 7/23/2017 4:34:00 AM
Hi Alona , as I was reading I found myself sitting at a big log fire looking out the window ,,,beautiful write :)))))hugs
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Alona Perlin
Date: 7/24/2017 9:18:00 AM
Nice. This is where I grew up, Odessa, Ukraine. It wasn't so cozy and comfortable in my environment, but it was home... :) Thank you.
Date: 7/7/2017 2:59:00 PM
Nothing like a good book and bouillon when there's snow on the ground:) Can't be Odessa Tx, there aren't any trees there, perhaps Odessa Ks oh well. I enjoyed the poem, Alona (unusual name but very pretty)
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Alona Perlin
Date: 7/13/2017 9:22:00 AM
That's true. Thank you. No, actually it's Odessa, Ukraine, where I was born. :) I'm glad you liked the poem.

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