My Willows

fine mist of green
on my
ancient
willow trees
broken from a hard winter wind

I stand behind them looking over
and see another story not visible
from my window
bark is smooth and 
twisted turned
these trees are very old

next stands a giant chestnut
rare in these woods
but magnificent
a general and commander
dark wood and hundred year stretching branches
not a bud yet

sit and listen
by the stream
for sounds of  a story one hundred years ago
we can only guess
but I feel them dancing in the yard.
I see the well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 11, 2009 at 10:29 AM
I love the last with the hundred year old stories dancing in the yard! Beautiful imagery!! So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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September 10, 2009 at 8:16 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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September 9, 2009 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, mj
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September 9, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Very nicely done! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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September 9, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Veronica, thanks for sharing your amazing poetry with us. Congrats on your feature write this week. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 9, 2009 at 2:36 AM
I can see the trees and hear the story. Keep writing. Sara
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September 8, 2009 at 2:38 PM
Veronica, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 7, 2009 at 4:09 PM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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September 7, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Veronica>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations, Veronica, on having your poem featured this week. It is always delightful to read beautiful poetry like this. Through your words, I, too, see them well, in the memories of the trees. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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September 7, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Veronica. Love, Carol
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March 30, 2009 at 3:54 PM
I love these images of trees dancing! A lovely poem! Well done, Veronica. ~ Carrie
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