My Wild Gypsy Muse

through my garden gate
   she goes roaming with my pen
      my wild gypsy muse
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Neumann Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 6:11 AM
That is brilliant. Happy writing in a Happy New Year, Kai
Lane Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Thanks ever so much.
Hamilton Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 9:38 AM
Nice write Lin, did you know the gypsy name came from Europeans wrongly thinking they (Roma people) came from Egypt hence Gyptsies, I thought it was interesting!
Lane Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 9:42 AM
I had no idea that's how the word came about. You're full of news and kind comments this morning. Thanks ever so much.
Ravidas Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 4:58 PM
My grandmother's matrilineal grandfather was a Gypsy from the camp. Te aves bahtali)
Lane Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 4:41 AM
Te aves i tu
Ravidas Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 5:25 PM
Literally, be happy. The answer: Te aves i tu (You too)
Lane Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 5:13 PM
hmmm much shorter to say 'hello,' but then a Gypsy wouldn't know that. Thanks.
Ravidas Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 5:05 PM
Translation is hello (addressing to woman).
Lane Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 5:03 PM
Romani? Translation please. I've always been fascinated with their lifestyle.
Barden Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 3:09 AM
Indeed ... HAD to dip my toes in this one! ;o)
Lane Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Well, by all means. Take off those shoes and wade in. Thanks, Greg.
Foster Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 2:49 PM
I love this... I can see a long quill one day... and then a sharpy the next... coloring and writing the day away... hehe... Merry Christmas. Love your work. Ann
Lane Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 4:36 PM
lol Ann. She marches to the beat of her own drum. Thanks ever so much for your humor and kind comments.
Cunningham Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 10:14 AM
Keep her well in sight Lin, if she goes you might lose her. Tom
Lane Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 10:51 AM
Good morning, dear Tom. We have a pact. She can roam about freely, as long as she returns when I whisper her name. Thank you for your comments and advice.
Theraven Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Lin. So nice to find this Senryu this morning. Thankful for your Wild Gypsy Muse. -Richard
Lane Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 10:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Richard ~ I'll be sure to let her know.
Green Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Follow her because she always creates such beautiful blooms from your pen. Loved this Lin, short, sweet and absolutely beautiful.
Lane Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Thank you for your dulcet thoughts, Chris. I have no choice but to follow...she ran off with my pen.
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