My Whole Universe

You're my whole universe
And my whole heart
I know
We will never ever
Be apart
Grab my hand
We'll watch the water
Drift up to the land
We're holding hands
All I can think about is
What we have planned
I have no doubt 
That we'll never be without
Without one another
Baby, you're like no other
I think about you
Day in and day out
Sometimes I get alittle blue
Just because I think about
A day without you
When you kiss me
I feel like I'm about to
Fall out of the sky
Because the breath you take
It feels like I'm going to die
It feels like I'm flying
Way up high
I can touch a cloud
And say goodbye
Suddenly, I realized
It was you and I
You and I
Kissing under the stars
Its seems like they are nearby
It feels like I'm dreaming
But things are as they seem
I know this isn't a dream
You're the reason my heart is beating

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/8/2011 4:08:00 AM
a little childish
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Date: 9/8/2011 12:24:00 PM
I am only 14 years old. Childish, eh? Thanks. ;)
Date: 7/4/2010 5:31:00 PM
Congrats on being featured. Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:35:00 PM
I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/29/2010 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Kimber. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:32:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:21:00 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:56:00 AM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Kimber. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2010 4:51:00 PM
So enjoyed your very creative and positive outlook of a write.. wonderful and energetic.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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