Winged Warrior Poet Senryu

My White Picket Fence

my white picket fence
expecting the beautiful…
now behind hells bars




5/7/5


March.18.2019
Writing Challenge 3
March Senryu
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Placed 4'th...Thank You

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Paul Marc April 11, 2019 at 4:12 PM Expectations tend to do that ~ excellent Senryu my friend. Funny and wise ;)

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2019 at 8:12 PM Belated Congrats on your win. Nice seeing this one finally.

Jennifer Proxenos March 21, 2019 at 3:30 AM Great Imagery and soulful words, Congratulations on your win ^WW^. Poetry hugs , Jennifer.

Eve Roper March 20, 2019 at 6:55 PM ^WW^, looks like someone through a cigarette out of a car window. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Constance La France March 20, 2019 at 4:59 PM John, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine Senryu and I like your image too ~

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2019 at 2:37 PM - Congratulations on your great win, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe March 19, 2019 at 7:23 AM You say much in your short poem. Life behind the picket fence can be hellish

Line Gauthier March 18, 2019 at 9:52 AM Striking illusion, WW.

Caren Krutsinger March 18, 2019 at 8:49 AM A poetic masterpiece, this one.