My Weeping Violin

I would always cry to his tune Slowly i saw my life before my eyes How could one life in such world, all but love My soul shivers at the thought in which the light will forever fade from me Still, my heart wonders of a beautiful scene where love is all I miss you so much sometimes it hurts These tears fall without an end, it's so hard to hide the pain To smile as if nothing is wrong, i hate this life i pretend Death awaits us all, still i believe some to be gone while still here Is not the taste of life a cruel and bitter one Where has the happily ever afters gone? Today is ugly, love is rare, yet hate is all around Am i the only one that sees this, it's hard to swallow I will forever cry, tomorrow isn't promised and neither is happiness All we truly have is faith, and in faith lays hope Yet we all wonder how our hearts are touched by a weeping violin

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Date: 4/18/2018 4:43:00 AM
A very deep and emotional poem Edward, poignant and elegantly expressed. Truly enjoyed .....Maria
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Date: 3/10/2018 11:56:00 AM
such an emotional poem Edward very well penned:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/10/2018 9:55:00 AM
I can feel the emotion in this one. Very expressive work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:30:00 AM
A excellent thought provoking write that is so true. Hugs
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Date: 2/27/2018 11:27:00 AM
Beautifully penned Edward! Sad and melancholic ... You commented on my poem so I came to visit you. And see you've been here for a long time. You must write something new! :) Best, Judy
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:27:00 AM
- A heartbreaking write, Edward - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2016 9:28:00 PM
I feel your pain! Remember we can change nothing but our perception.Look for the good and what your looking for.Likes attract.
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Date: 3/4/2015 10:34:00 AM
Such a touching poem you have created dear Edward. a 7 Blessings
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:39:00 PM
What a great piece Eddie. Loved it.
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Date: 10/21/2014 2:16:00 PM
My heart is touched by this weeping violin Eddie.This poem transmits a combination of sad and beauty,leaving me speechless.A favourite.
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