My Weeping Violin

I would always cry to his tune Slowly i saw my life before my eyes How could one life in such world, all but love My soul shivers at the thought in which the light will forever fade from me Still, my heart wonders of a beautiful scene where love is all I miss you so much sometimes it hurts These tears fall without an end, it's so hard to hide the pain To smile as if nothing is wrong, i hate this life i pretend Death awaits us all, still i believe some to be gone while still here Is not the taste of life a cruel and bitter one Where has the happily ever afters gone? Today is ugly, love is rare, yet hate is all around Am i the only one that sees this, it's hard to swallow I will forever cry, tomorrow isn't promised and neither is happiness All we truly have is faith, and in faith lays hope Yet we all wonder how our hearts are touched by a weeping violin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Williams Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 4:43 AM
A very deep and emotional poem Edward, poignant and elegantly expressed. Truly enjoyed .....Maria
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 11:56 AM
such an emotional poem Edward very well penned:-) hugs jan xx
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March 10, 2018 at 9:55 AM
I can feel the emotion in this one. Very expressive work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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February 28, 2018 at 11:30 AM
A excellent thought provoking write that is so true. Hugs
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February 27, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Beautifully penned Edward! Sad and melancholic ... You commented on my poem so I came to visit you. And see you've been here for a long time. You must write something new! :) Best, Judy
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February 25, 2018 at 7:27 AM
- A heartbreaking write, Edward - // Anne-Lise :)
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September 7, 2016 at 9:28 PM
I feel your pain! Remember we can change nothing but our perception.Look for the good and what your looking for.Likes attract.
Roper Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Such a touching poem you have created dear Edward. a 7 Blessings
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October 22, 2014 at 9:39 PM
What a great piece Eddie. Loved it.
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October 21, 2014 at 2:16 PM
My heart is touched by this weeping violin Eddie.This poem transmits a combination of sad and beauty,leaving me speechless.A favourite.
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