My Week

I have a whole week
On this hilltop house
With trees for company
And flowers as friends
Lazing in the gazebo
Feeding the ducks 
Life is true pleasure
With no intrusion from the world
Writing poetry
When a thought dances
Into the grey matter
Drinking coffee 
And eating tons of chocolates
Sleeping when the eyes
Decide the time
Waking when the birds
Give a call
My whole week spent 
In entire serenity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Congrats, Tahera. Great write. Nice going. xxxRalph
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 2:47 PM
sounds like a wonderful week, congrats on your win in the contest
Neels Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 6:49 AM
I can do with a week of serenity :) congratulations Tahera ;) bb Wilma
Mehta Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:39 AM
Congrats on notching 2nd place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
Freeman Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Well deserved win at the top Tahera. Congratulations on your well deserved honor at the top. Agape, Moses
Gorelick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:17 PM
Oh, you make me want the same thing..just peace and quiet. Congrats on your win.,.,BG
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 2:54 PM
This is just wonderful, Tahera. COngratulations. I enjoyed this one alot. LUv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 1:26 PM
This week under the gazebo sounds heavenly.....may I join you...?? I promise not to say a word!! :) I love your poem!!!
Mehta Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Tahera
Sweetheart Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Congrats Tahera on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this amazing entry my sweet friend.. enjoy your top spot today with so many wonderful peers luv..
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations and thank you Tahera for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
Eggins Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 4:13 AM
Sigh wonderful poem ... brava smile I have line envy and thanks for the comment on my poem love Jayne
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 6:57 PM
I really like how you did this challenge, the way you described, sleeping when the eyes decide the time. wish I had thought of this one!!
Devonshire Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 8:00 AM
This sounds like a wonderful, relaxing way to spend your week surrounded by nature, Tahera. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Lovely Tahera and good luck in the contest with these simple and serene things to bring R and R into your life for one whole week of fun.. good luck my friend in the contest...luv..enjoyed..
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Very lucky, Tahera, to spend the week end in entire serenity, and good luck in the contest
Haick Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 9:20 PM
Ah, to have beautiful serenity in solitude with nature for company! A perfect treat, Tahera! Not to mention the chocolates!! These are all blessings! Love this.. Peace, love, Audrey
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