My Week

I have a whole week On this hilltop house With trees for company And flowers as friends Lazing in the gazebo Feeding the ducks Life is true pleasure With no intrusion from the world Writing poetry When a thought dances Into the grey matter Drinking coffee And eating tons of chocolates Sleeping when the eyes Decide the time Waking when the birds Give a call My whole week spent In entire serenity

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/29/2010 4:12:00 PM

Congrats, Tahera. Great write. Nice going. xxxRalph

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/28/2010 2:47:00 PM

sounds like a wonderful week, congrats on your win in the contest

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/28/2010 6:49:00 AM

I can do with a week of serenity :) congratulations Tahera ;) bb Wilma

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 10/28/2010 12:39:00 AM

Congrats on notching 2nd place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta

John Freeman

Date: 10/27/2010 5:54:00 PM

Well deserved win at the top Tahera. Congratulations on your well deserved honor at the top. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/27/2010 4:17:00 PM

Oh, you make me want the same thing..just peace and quiet. Congrats on your win.,.,BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2010 2:54:00 PM

This is just wonderful, Tahera. COngratulations. I enjoyed this one alot. LUv, Andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/27/2010 1:26:00 PM

This week under the gazebo sounds heavenly.....may I join you...?? I promise not to say a word!! :) I love your poem!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/27/2010 1:22:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Tahera

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/27/2010 12:57:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this amazing entry my sweet friend.. enjoy your top spot today with so many wonderful peers luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/27/2010 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations and thank you Tahera for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/3/2010 4:13:00 AM

Sigh wonderful poem ... brava smile I have line envy and thanks for the comment on my poem love Jayne

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2010 6:57:00 PM

I really like how you did this challenge, the way you described, sleeping when the eyes decide the time. wish I had thought of this one!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2010 8:00:00 AM

This sounds like a wonderful, relaxing way to spend your week surrounded by nature, Tahera. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/29/2010 8:06:00 PM

Lovely Tahera and good luck in the contest with these simple and serene things to bring R and R into your life for one whole week of fun.. good luck my friend in the contest...luv..enjoyed..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/29/2010 5:45:00 AM

Very lucky, Tahera, to spend the week end in entire serenity, and good luck in the contest

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/28/2010 9:20:00 PM

Ah, to have beautiful serenity in solitude with nature for company! A perfect treat, Tahera! Not to mention the chocolates!! These are all blessings! Love this.. Peace, love, Audrey