My Way Or His

My will have I tried
Depths of despair have I wrought
I turn to you God

2nd place in the contest

Written on 5/11/11 
for Brian Strand's "Whatever" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest R.M. Love, Carol
Hunt Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Thank you very much!
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, R.M
Hunt Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram:)
Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week R.M. Love, Carol
Hunt Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Carol! Nice to see you back:)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 6:02 PM
Congrats R.M. on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..
Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Thank you very much:)
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 4:46 PM
I told you Brian would love it. Congratulations!!!
Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Thank you buddy:)
Dufresne Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 5:47 AM
funny how we always try our own will first eh RM? wonderfull win with this succinct poem message. Congratulations to you
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 9:38 PM
Congrats on your glowing win, RM... fabulous! :) huggs
Gorelick Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:26 PM
Congrats to you...a wonderful win...BG
Freeman Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Been there and done that! Great to see you in the top three, R.m. Congratulations on your poem's success in Brian's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
Foulk Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 5:03 PM
what a creative and beautiful piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on first mothers day.
Hunt Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Thank y'all so much for your kind comments. They mean so much to me:) God Bless you:D R.M.
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:49 PM
This poem reflects deep faith, R.M. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Congrats my friend on your win!!
Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:19 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, R.M.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Congrats R.M. on your big win in Whatever contest with this wonderful write my friend.. awesome message for us all..enjoy luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 8:49 PM
He is the only ONE to turn to for HE is always there for His children R.M. a praise worthy Haiku for the Creator of all.. enjoyed ..happy weekend..
Green Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 4:42 PM
the best of the best brother, it is wonderful, by far..
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 8:50 PM
I think surely Brian will love this one. It's wonderfully spiritual, R.M.
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