Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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My Water Pearls of Wisdom

~My Water Pearls Of Wisdom~ 
(Free Verse) 


Wishes stands in multiples 
Pride stands alone and sad 
Peace is for us to spread it 
Love if for us to give and share it 

Pain and sorrows are to transform us 
Hopes are to bring us more pieces of dreams 
Faith is to keep us always in place 
Dreams are to bring us more pieces of joy! 

Wisdom is to teach us to be better people 
Peace is to fill us with more inner glow 
Truth is to bring us more freedom and light 
Love is to give us the real joy 

But only God can really transform us and 
Give us life! 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015 


January,16,2015

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Comfort Eboigbe February 15, 2015 at 6:47 AM this was awesome to read with a direct message

Thabang Ngoma January 17, 2015 at 3:14 AM Hi Dorian...reading this write had me at smiles and wows and aahs, if that makes sense...very wise indeed...rgds, 7habang Dorian Petersen Potter January 17, 2015 at 3:39 AM Hi Thabang!Thank you so very much my very dear friend for stopping by and for your very kind comments. So glad to know that it made sense to you. Much appreciated it! Have a very lovely day! xxxoxxox D.^O^

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 16, 2015 at 9:22 AM Read it.Loved it. Felt it. Enjoyed it. Sweet D Dorian Petersen Potter January 17, 2015 at 3:43 AM Hello Rajat! So glad you did my dearest friend and thank you so much for stopping and leaving me such a beautiful pearl of comment. You humbled me so much with all your kindness. Your friendship means a lot to me. Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^

Emile Pinet January 16, 2015 at 9:00 AM You have eloquently defined your acceptance of self and God. A touching and revealing poem that reaches out and grabs your heart. Dorian Petersen Potter January 17, 2015 at 3:47 AM Hi Emile!Thank you so very much my very dear friend for stopping by and for your very kind comments. I' m so humbled by your very beautiful review. Much appreciated it! Have a very lovely day! xxxoxxox D.^O^

David Meade January 16, 2015 at 8:44 AM Life that is truly Life!! Nicely done dear Dorian . . . much love and light, 7 Dorian Petersen Potter January 17, 2015 at 3:50 AM Hello David !Thank you so very much my dearest friend for stopping by and for your very kind and sweet comments as always. My heart so touched as always so happy you came to visit me. Much appreciated it! Have a very lovely day! xxxoxxox D.^O^