Malaki Fleming Poet Ode

My Warrior In a Bottle

My precious hand sanitizer how I love you so much.
You make me feel O so powerful killing 99.99% 
Of those bedraggled germs
Your strong smell is more forceful  than a king
You come in many hues
And many configurations and are immaculate in all ways
You are my powerful assassin
Some can not handle your forceful power 
And mighty smell
But I can with stand it 
Some people spite you but not I
You are my right hand man
All the infinitesimal germs on my hands fear you
The fear you spread through the germs 
Moves faster than wildfire
And stronger than lighting
You are my warrior in a bottle 
My precious hand sanitizer what would I do without you
My hands are the country and you are my warrior 
You keep the sickness at bay
When I put you on, you wrap my hands with your powerful might
My precious hand sanitizer I love you so much
And you make me feel O so powerful
-Malaki Fleming
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Stanley Carter October 20, 2016 at 9:18 PM I never thought I'd read a poem about hand sanitizer -- let alone enjoy it Purell should use it in an ad. I would say your poem was "tongue in cheek," but then it would be about Listerine.

Skat A September 28, 2016 at 10:51 PM Malamki, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Malaki Fleming September 28, 2016 at 10:56 AM Good Job!