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March 19, 2024

"Legend" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Silent One

a gentleman from a grand, but time-worn oil-painting, unbelievably handsome in his forties, immaculately dressed in a formal grey suit, from the backdrop of a luscious tea-garden on a mountaineous plush valley, looked at me with an intriguing smile..... in my maternal grandmother’s house! “Who is he?” I remember enquiring my mother, “And where did he go?” My mother's eyes welled up... but she wiped tears from her eyes, and always said in a firm voice, “He never left, He is with us”! Some day I realized, my grandfather passed away in his prime years, from a terrible disease called Meningitis! cruelly his life was cut short, but he left a legacy of honesty, integrity, bravery, compassion for the poor and the needy… he protected a huge population of distressed villagers in his area, from being ruthlessly slaughtered, when the country became devastated with riots between religious groups. Villagers composed and dedicated a song, chanting the bravery of a lonely warrior who courageously stood for them against barbarous enemies, sacrificing his own happiness, so numerous men, women, children could live unharmed, and sleep peacefully in their humble cottages. King Arthur, legendary knight of the Round Table... Legendary Robin Hood, the outlaw of Sherwood forest... The legend of my own warrior, jamais oublie'!

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Date: 4/10/2024 4:32:00 AM
Your poem is a moving tribute to your grandfather and the enduring power of his legacy. Through its rich imagery and heartfelt storytelling, it celebrates the timeless virtues of honour, bravery, and compassion, ensuring that the memory of the grandfather's heroic deeds will never be forgotten. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/10/2024 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet. I feel honoured with your placement in the contest!
Date: 3/22/2024 7:41:00 AM
Wonderfully reminiscing in beloved memories. A heartfelt tribute your wrote, Mala. Much enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 3/20/2024 11:21:00 PM
A very emotive write. Particularly appreciated the first stanza, which brings the warrior to life. Best wishes in the contest. Krishna
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/21/2024 4:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. I really appreciate your thoughtful comment. Mentioning the stanza you liked - brings me joy.
Date: 3/19/2024 2:30:00 PM
What a wonderful man and story of your grandfather Malabika! A legend indeed one to be proud of for sure! Debx
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/19/2024 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Deb. Glad you read my poem, which is a true story from my family history. Really appreciate your inspiring comment.

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