My Vow To You

I
vow
to you
this day forth
my full devotion
my heart belongs to only you
our souls meshed beyond terrestrial promises
these exchanged rings symbolizing our mortal union and consecrated destiny



AP:  Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Knowlton Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Beautiful poem Line…Right from the heart and sincere.
Gauthier Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Charlie.
B. Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 11:14 AM
An exquisite Fibonacci, Line.. Profound and truly touches one's soul.. Brava! Blessings..
Gauthier Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 11:48 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Robertina. Most appreciated.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 3:15 PM
That's every genuine vow of a soul of beauty and profusion to a highly valued and treasured soulmate! I liked and enjoyed your " Vow" dear Line! Keep shining and stay blessed always. A FAV.
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Thank you, Besma, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Gorgeous.
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Man Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 7:52 AM
A wonderful write of commitment!!
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thanks, LM, for your lovely visit and comment.
Mcguire Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:01 PM
Beautiful!
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Lovely, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thanks, Kim. Most appreciated.
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