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My Vision of Usa 2021

Wall street bells have a happier note,
their shaking fists, hands have confidence more,
in the surrounds of New York stock exchange,
camaraderie back with hugs and pats,
can now shake gloveless hands to say congrats, 
voices blare out through their coffee stained teeth,
no more suffocation, breath behind masks,
heaven’s stars have changed bringing leader astute,
countries health is restored, death bids
adieu,
vaccine has silenced the screams of deluge,
people flow on streets after fresh monsoon,
restaurant crowds enjoying freedom true,
the war is over and peace reigns again,
time to salute stars and stripes in blue!

7th placement Premier contest
Written 13/11/2020
LMILTON HANKINS
2021 USA Visionary
14 lines, free verse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your vision for America in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 11:19 PM
Beata Thank you and God bless you!
Gaul Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Krish, congratulations for your fine placement. Clever work, nice penning.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Many Thanks Greg for your visit and kind words!:)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 4:46 PM
I too am looking forward to these fantastic post pandemic days!
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Indeed Caren! The world is looking for a release!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 4:23 PM
We will all be overjoyed to kiss the plague goodbye. Love your thoughts. God bless you
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 6:35 AM
Thanks Regina! Lets hope the mist lifts!
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