My Vision of Usa 2021

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Wall street bells have a happier note,
their shaking fists, hands have confidence more,
in the surrounds of New York stock exchange,
camaraderie back with hugs and pats,
can now shake gloveless hands to say congrats, 
voices blare out through their coffee stained teeth,
no more suffocation, breath behind masks,
heaven’s stars have changed bringing leader astute,
countries health is restored, death bids
adieu,
vaccine has silenced the screams of deluge,
people flow on streets after fresh monsoon,
restaurant crowds enjoying freedom true,
the war is over and peace reigns again,
time to salute stars and stripes in blue!

7th placement Premier contest
Written 13/11/2020
LMILTON HANKINS
2021 USA Visionary
14 lines, free verse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/24/2020 9:58:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your vision for America in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/24/2020 11:19:00 PM
Beata Thank you and God bless you!
Date: 11/24/2020 4:03:00 PM
Krish, congratulations for your fine placement. Clever work, nice penning.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/24/2020 11:18:00 PM
Many Thanks Greg for your visit and kind words!:)
Date: 11/13/2020 4:46:00 PM
I too am looking forward to these fantastic post pandemic days!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/14/2020 6:33:00 AM
Indeed Caren! The world is looking for a release!
Date: 11/13/2020 4:23:00 PM
We will all be overjoyed to kiss the plague goodbye. Love your thoughts. God bless you
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/14/2020 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Regina! Lets hope the mist lifts!
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