My Viking Funeral

Viking Funeral

When that day comes that I will die 
Dress me in the finest clothes
Patterned from ecru silken threads
In contrast with my hazel eyes

As the sun sets west and reflects 
upon the sea so warm and blue
Place me in a sailing craft  
Hand carved from exquisite teak

Surround me with my memories 
My keepsakes and my written words
When the tide goes out to join the sea
please set my sails all pointed east

Aim and shoot a flaming shaft  
To pierce the boat set it aflame
And consume me on my final quest
to delve into my watery nest

When the last flame is extinguished,
 Retrieve my ashes from the craft 
And place them in an marble jar
And toss them in the ocean deep

My life has always been mundane
 I never lived to seize the day
My luck and judgements never meshed 
My essence nor my core refreshed

To take a trip in such a way
To be remembered on that day
Will seal the memory of my death
When I have breathed my final breath

*Revised Poem from years ago 4/3/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 5:40 PM
Oh Ralph, such a gorgeous poem of amazing rhythm and beautifully poetic lines that frame the amazing content of your poem perfectly. Outstanding throughout, I especially adore your sixth stanza the most.. 'My luck and judgements never meshed' - your introspection in this stanza is so lovely.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 1:32 PM
- A great poem, Ralph - Here where I live, we have a lot of old Viking graves - http://avaldsnes.info/historie/steinalder-12-000-1-500-f-kr/ - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 10:02 PM
This sounded familiar, I will have to check the original, as Connie says I hope the day is long off, if not maybe we can get a 2 for 1 discount on the viking ship!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Ralph let's hope that day is far off for you have reams to write and tomes to publish. Easter blessings, Connie 7 ; )
Sergi Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Thank you for your encouragement, Connie. i'm still trying to evolve (ha ha)
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