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My Viking Funeral

Viking Funeral When that day comes that I will die Dress me in the finest clothes Patterned from ecru silken threads In contrast with my hazel eyes As the sun sets west and reflects upon the sea so warm and blue Place me in a sailing craft Hand carved from exquisite teak Surround me with my memories My keepsakes and my written words When the tide goes out to join the sea please set my sails all pointed east Aim and shoot a flaming shaft To pierce the boat set it aflame And consume me on my final quest to delve into my watery nest When the last flame is extinguished, Retrieve my ashes from the craft And place them in an marble jar And toss them in the ocean deep My life has always been mundane I never lived to seize the day My luck and judgements never meshed My essence nor my core refreshed To take a trip in such a way To be remembered on that day Will seal the memory of my death When I have breathed my final breath *Revised Poem from years ago 4/3/2017

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Date: 3/23/2018 5:40:00 PM
Oh Ralph, such a gorgeous poem of amazing rhythm and beautifully poetic lines that frame the amazing content of your poem perfectly. Outstanding throughout, I especially adore your sixth stanza the most.. 'My luck and judgements never meshed' - your introspection in this stanza is so lovely.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 4/9/2017 1:32:00 PM
- A great poem, Ralph - Here where I live, we have a lot of old Viking graves - http://avaldsnes.info/historie/steinalder-12-000-1-500-f-kr/ - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/5/2017 10:02:00 PM
This sounded familiar, I will have to check the original, as Connie says I hope the day is long off, if not maybe we can get a 2 for 1 discount on the viking ship!
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Date: 4/2/2017 5:54:00 PM
Ralph let's hope that day is far off for you have reams to write and tomes to publish. Easter blessings, Connie 7 ; )
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/3/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement, Connie. i'm still trying to evolve (ha ha)

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