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My Very First Time

I am now remembering The very first time for me Was it like this for you? I bet it was you see … We are not so different From each other as we think We all do good and bad things Others do things that stink … It’s the first time ever I am trembling with delight There is a fear in me Will everything be alright?... Will I really regret this? Will it be the best ever? Will I ever forget it? I think the answer’s never… But we all have a first time And this is how mine went Shame excitement and blushes And there were some things got bent… It will never be the same As that very first time Legs in the air Some think it was a crime… But the rush and the excitement Lives with me still As I fell off my bike And rolled down that hill … © ~GG~ 08/06/2013

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John Posey

Date: 6/21/2013 10:32:00 AM

Hmmmm, so that's what they mean when they say once you learn to ride a bicycle, you never forget...OMG... congratulations, Mandy... You got more than a snicker outa me with this one.... Jake

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/19/2013 3:10:00 PM

'Legs in the air' and then, wham!..You hit us with another surprise ending...Got a nice giggle out of this little gem...Congratulations my friend! - Tim

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/19/2013 10:16:00 AM

One thinks she knows what this is all about........such a clever "hmmmm..."....did I assume too much?? lol !!! Well done!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2013 9:43:00 AM

Hi Mandy, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ always & forever * LINDA

Skat A

Date: 6/19/2013 9:21:00 AM

MANDY, ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME POEM. *LUV ~SKAT~

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/10/2013 6:38:00 AM

Heehee lol..You put a smile on my face..The first time i fell of my bike i ached with pain but my first time blushing was when i fell on a first date.I was wearing a long coat and high heels..It rained cats and there i fell on my arse..rigjt beside the cinema ..in the street.Where there any people?Plenty :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2013 10:53:00 PM

hahahaha, LOVE IT. Fave.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/8/2013 8:07:00 PM

adorable! i knew this wasn't about the obvious, but was delighted by the ending anyway...

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/8/2013 3:39:00 PM

Oh you are back to your old tricks Girl, but still enjoyed, well not rolling down the hill maybe!!!!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/8/2013 3:02:00 PM

I love the twist. It gave me a chuckle, this delightful poem. Smashing Manding. Warm Smiles, Connie

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/8/2013 1:53:00 PM

This had me very exited until the last verse. Great write as usual.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2013 9:51:00 AM

Love the surprise ending! Good one, Mandy! Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2013 5:39:00 AM

- ... everything has a "first" time ..... But what is life without daring to try ... - Feel the blood "fizz" .... see the stars of happiness .. - Very well written poem Mandy. - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/8/2013 5:22:00 AM

nice write Mandy....i knew it would be a surprise ending...best wishes