Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Tetractys

My Very First Time

I 
                                        jerked it
                                        out to place
                                        it back in and
                                        it seems as though I can't get any out.

                                        I
                                      jerked it
                                     out again
                                  to place it back
                       in, yet, no luck in getting any out.

                                        So,
                                      I tried
                                    ANOTHER
                               form of Pleasure,
                      taking off the lid and using plastic.

                                        I 
                                        simply
                                        just wanted
                                        to drink my milk-
                                        shake using a straw but a spoon will do.



Pace, G
04-20-2012

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Brenda Chiri November 3, 2019 at 5:11 PM G lmao this was so silly I knew it wasn't what I thought but I didn't think a milkshake either haha! Good one ya got me lol! Hugs B Pace Ink-U-Script November 3, 2019 at 6:33 PM Lmao!

Robin Davis March 28, 2014 at 8:58 AM Pace This was a fun and humorous write. You really "punked" the reader. LOL You should read my My Poem Of Trickery And Fun. Thanks for the sweet comment on my Angels poem.

Caleah Buil May 10, 2013 at 10:57 AM LOL! I loved this! Kept me entertained of what you were going to do about it till the end. ;)

Devondra Banks August 27, 2012 at 11:41 AM Loooooove this! Lol

Richard Palmer August 13, 2012 at 12:49 PM great write PG Ink,shake it lol

Doreen Wright July 28, 2012 at 10:01 PM Taking off the lid and using plastic? Hmmmmmm...interesting! I like this and that lol!!

Poet Destroyer A July 1, 2012 at 9:54 AM lol... for a minute....... I was thinking you were trying to squeeze money out of your very first piggy bank...lol... i remember the first time i jerked my piggy bank around and could not get them pennies out...lol..i put it back,, than i decided to give it a second chance. LOL~ Than i settled for the second option. I dropped it on the floor and Oops!!! IT BROKE! I'm very glad you found out that spoons WILL DO"... hope you tossed that plastic in the recycling bin... I'm being silly in my comment. The whole time I knew what you were doing.. LMFAO...PD

Bertha Davis June 7, 2012 at 11:43 AM Cute....Love the way you draw me in, playing with my mind.

Carma Sanderson June 2, 2012 at 12:18 AM "I'll take one cup, or two, or three, Please... heeheeeee... Carma Sanderson June 2, 2012 at 4:52 PM I know,but you love it you can't deniy me! Lol... told you i was bad... Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:35 AM Lol..wow!! You are too much!! Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:35 AM Lmao

Justcallme Britt June 1, 2012 at 3:34 PM Yea this was AWESOME!! Pace Ink-U-Script June 1, 2012 at 4:19 PM Lol..Thank you!! Love your work dearly!!

Shaz Cheesman May 26, 2012 at 1:59 AM Oh Very clever !!!! LOL - loved it. Pace Ink-U-Script May 28, 2012 at 5:40 AM Thank you!!

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2012 at 8:53 PM hahahaha. LOVE It. Pace Ink-U-Script May 12, 2012 at 2:18 AM Lol..Thank you!!

Elizabeth Wesley April 30, 2012 at 8:10 AM So glad you explained it all in the last 2 lines. It's great getting my day started with a laugh ! Pace Ink-U-Script April 30, 2012 at 9:32 AM Thank you for stopping by!! A pleasure!!

Pace Ink-U-Script April 27, 2012 at 9:56 PM Lol...thanks..hugs

Terry L. Allen April 27, 2012 at 9:16 PM A little misdirection never hurt anyone cute. Here's a Hugg for the fun TLee Pace Ink-U-Script April 30, 2012 at 9:31 AM Lol!!! Thanks for sharing your comments.. hugs

Joseph May April 21, 2012 at 9:23 AM nice one G...regards...Joseph Pace Ink-U-Script April 30, 2012 at 9:30 AM Thanks for stopping by!!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity April 20, 2012 at 9:17 PM lol... i luv it... good one G Pace... smiles... chiquita Pace Ink-U-Script April 30, 2012 at 9:30 AM Thank you for sharing with me!!

T Garrison April 20, 2012 at 3:06 PM LOL...that was a good one :) Only you! Pace Ink-U-Script April 20, 2012 at 3:35 PM Thank you so much for sharing!!! Hugs and kisses

Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2012 at 1:54 PM Good one G. - one cup milk every day is good for you. :) - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise :) Pace Ink-U-Script April 20, 2012 at 3:34 PM Thank you very much!!

Marty Owens April 20, 2012 at 11:26 AM LOL I love this...it is so unique!! Marty Pace Ink-U-Script April 20, 2012 at 11:27 AM Thank you sooo much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! hugs