My Venerable Dad - Memory Snippet On Fathers Day

Lucky day!   Father McShane was on the altar.
I knelt in gratitude, in silent applause.

He said mass faster than the lead car in a drag race.  
Hosts flew and before we knew it: “Ite, missa est.” *

The nine a.m. ritual was well worth it on Sundays with daddy.
Out of the mist of sneezy incense, enclosed in glass tabernacles

food for the soul of another kind awaited us at the Brewster bakery.
Father and daughter a spiritual team of confectionary communicants, 

were in search of the one true doughnut, the absolute muffin.
My father kept us ever faithful. 

*Go, the Mass is ended 

©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins
June 14, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 9:44 AM
'...confectionary communicants,' I LOVE IT! '...faster than the lead car in a drag race,' your turns of phrase are unique, sometimes funny and always refreshing! A marvelous piece. :) x
Horne Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:45 AM
a truly beautiful memory of Sundays and your father
Kendrick Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Your earthly father had the right idea..Feed the spirit and feed the human hunger for a healthy child..Enjoyed reading your remembrance of your father..He must have been a very good father..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara
Macmillan Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Only had a minute. And I am so glad I spent it here. Isn't it amazing how the simple things become memories we cherish? I remember cross country skiing with my dad through farmer's fields, stopping and sharing gorp (trail mix), some lukewarm hot chocolate, admring winter birds and the treks we created. Your poem is wonderfu., catching a time to cherish. hugs, Cyndi
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 11:38 AM
yes yes, I lOVE this one. FAVE
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