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My Valley

My Valley Tucked away in the north-central part of the state, about ten miles or so from where the clear and slow-moving water of the Grand River mixes with the quickly rolling mud of the Missouri River. Was my isolated valley. A tiny insignificant place dotted with small farms and rolling pastureland of bluestem, switch, and Indian grass. Somewhere just off the beaten path and a little left of “where the hell am I anyway”. From high up in the hills where the Crabapple and Cottonwood creeks merge just outside Log Cabin Station, there is a small creek that begins to snake its way south for thirty miles or so along the northern boundary of that rich Sugar Maple bottom land. For seventy centuries the Sioux Indians fished, hunted, and thrived there. They were the first to speak its name. The abundance of wildlife in the area led them to believe that that small waterway was the ‘River of the Great Spirit’, and they called it…Wakenda. Life moves in circles, Like the oceans ebb and flow, There are no shortcuts.

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Date: 12/6/2023 6:46:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Jerry. Well written Haibun with interesting information on that part of our world, my friend. The Haiku at the end was a bit of wisdom. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/7/2023 5:56:00 AM
Thank you, Bill. I've never been a person who wrote in a particular form, or structure. I usually just throw some words on a page and try to make them rhyme.
Date: 12/6/2023 4:16:00 PM
an interesting Haibun, Jerry. I found the initial information most interesting. I like 'River of the Great Spirit' (Wakenda). I think the native Americans had a way about them...spiritual in their own way, one with nature. Your haiku at the end was profound and wise. I have to fave this one...have a great evening, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/6/2023 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I appreciate the fav.

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