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'my Valentine Gift'

a little patchy   
this treasure worth more than gold 
a keepsake for you
the exuberance is back 
my heart is pounding again

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Kim Merryman

February 21, 2012 at 7:28 PM

Congrats on your win, Wilma! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 21, 2012 at 5:47 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ~Andrea's~ "Tanka Your Valentine Gift" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

February 20, 2012 at 12:45 PM

Wilma,Congrats on your win in Andrea's contest.Enjoyed it first time around.

Lizanne Scholtz

February 19, 2012 at 4:16 PM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely Tanka Wilma, love Elizabeth

Samual Ronthorpe

February 19, 2012 at 12:03 PM

Wilma, awesome write. I really liked this Tanka. Well done. Congrats on placing on Andrea's winners list........................S.Ronthorpe

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 19, 2012 at 6:24 AM

Lovely tanka, congratulations xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 18, 2012 at 9:37 PM

congrats Wilma on a wonderful win for this loving gift lucv....

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2012 at 9:06 PM

Wilma. what I loved most in this one was the last two lines about exuberance back again. Nothing like fresh romantic love, or the REfreshment of it!!! Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

February 18, 2012 at 8:58 PM

sweetness, wilma.. rush hour, so here’s a generic greeting to you and the rest….loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

February 7, 2012 at 10:09 PM

Wilma, hi..... i love my new pumping heart... pumm pumm... very nice...pd

Michael J. Falotico

February 7, 2012 at 12:59 PM

You said it perfecty.... no price on a smile .... well written piece... missed you latley....But now Im back in NY!!!... and the Soup... luv n hugs Michael