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My Valentine Gift

A singing lobster,*
‘Commando’ graphic novels,
Skelton T-shirts:
All presents she has asked for;
Wonder what she wants this year…

*animatronics, not living, LOL

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Kim Merryman

February 21, 2012 at 7:31 PM

Congrats on your win, Jack! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 21, 2012 at 5:49 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ~Andrea's~ "Tanka Your Valentine Gift" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

February 20, 2012 at 12:47 PM

Congrats Jack on your win in Andrea's Contest.enjoyed the read.

Lizanne Scholtz

February 19, 2012 at 4:18 PM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely Tanka Jack, love Elizabeth

Samual Ronthorpe

February 19, 2012 at 12:11 PM

Jack - "A singing lobster"......LMAO....That is great stuff. Wonderful Tanka, my friend. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on placing on Andrea's winners list........................S.Ronthorpe

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 19, 2012 at 6:25 AM

Lovely tanka, congratulations xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 18, 2012 at 9:38 PM

congrats Jack on a wonderful win for this loving gift luv..

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2012 at 9:08 PM

hmmm, were these gifts for SUE? I was thinking for a daughter maybe. If not, then she is really young thinking!!(kinda like me!)

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2012 at 9:07 PM

This was cute, imagining all these fun teenage gifts. So what DId you get her this year?? I am the kind of person who loves singing toys. I get one every Xmas for my collection! I will never grow up. Congrats on your win, Jack.

Nette Onclaud

February 18, 2012 at 8:59 PM

soo cute, jack... rush hour, so here’s a generic greeting to you and the rest….loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Carolyn Devonshire

February 8, 2012 at 11:22 AM

You and Sue belong together! :) I would really like to see the singing lobster. These may seem like strange gifts to some people, but I would have asked for fishing gear to get that lobster. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

February 7, 2012 at 12:05 PM

I can think of a few things Jack hehe, enjoyed your witty Tanka, all the best for Andrea's contest ;) lfde W

Sara Kendrick

February 5, 2012 at 2:23 PM

Interesting love in your life..She must keep the scene lively...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara

Russell Sivey

February 5, 2012 at 1:25 PM

She wants Thor's hammer earrings this year, ha ha! This is a romantic write! It's cute what you get for her! I really enjoyed this poem this afternoon, very cleverly written! Great Work!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 5, 2012 at 12:50 PM

Never saw the singing lobster, but I do remember the fish singing "Take Me to the River". Your wife sounds like a fun lady! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda