Poesy Relish Poet Haiku

My Valentine

*** Lets dance ***

Roses and champagne

Soft flow of music, we dine-

Let us dance as one


*** Be mine ***

Moving to the cue

Drowning in your gaze i seek-

Be my valentine.


*** Yours forever ***

An endless night

and as we entwine-

Would you make me just thine?


©  Nadiya (2 Feb '15)

* Placed 6th in the contest 'Double Valentine Haiku Plus one Questionku #2' by Poet Destroyer.

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Sara Kendrick March 26, 2015 at 5:49 PM Ahh!! Romantic winning work..Way to go ..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison March 24, 2015 at 3:35 PM dropping back with my congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus March 22, 2015 at 3:08 PM Beautiful and romantic set of haiku, Nadiya! Love your final question:) Congratulations on your fine win. // paul

Poet Destroyer A March 22, 2015 at 1:46 PM POESY, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

Liam Mcdaid February 5, 2015 at 5:51 AM truly nadiya beautifully crafted piece excellent pen dear friend Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 6:26 AM Thank you Liam for your ever supportive comment...nad!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2015 at 12:45 PM - Love is strong, romantic and beautiful - Valentine poems that glows, Nadiya !!! (#7) - One winning proposals in my eyes :) - hug // Anne-Lise :) Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 1:08 PM Thank you Anne-Lise for your lovely words... lov, nad!

Jan Allison February 2, 2015 at 2:21 PM sooo romantic - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Poesy Relish February 2, 2015 at 3:13 PM Thank you Jan... lov n hugs

Casarah Nance February 2, 2015 at 8:16 AM This was absolutely beautiful! Nicely done! Poesy Relish February 2, 2015 at 9:05 AM Thank you Casarah...

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 2, 2015 at 3:49 AM Nad, check the rules. You have to write 2 haiku 5-7-5 and one Questionku 4/5/6 in the contest.Love>rajat Poesy Relish February 2, 2015 at 3:52 AM Thank you Rajat.. my first time writing In this form... ll make the changes...