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My Valentine

*** Lets dance *** Roses and champagne Soft flow of music, we dine- Let us dance as one *** Be mine *** Moving to the cue Drowning in your gaze i seek- Be my valentine. *** Yours forever *** An endless night and as we entwine- Would you make me just thine? © Nadiya (2 Feb '15) * Placed 6th in the contest 'Double Valentine Haiku Plus one Questionku #2' by Poet Destroyer.

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Date: 3/26/2015 5:49:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic winning work..Way to go ..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2015 3:35:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2015 3:08:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic set of haiku, Nadiya! Love your final question:) Congratulations on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 3/22/2015 1:46:00 PM
POESY, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/5/2015 5:51:00 AM
truly nadiya beautifully crafted piece excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 2/5/2015 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Liam for your ever supportive comment...nad!
Date: 2/3/2015 12:45:00 PM
- Love is strong, romantic and beautiful - Valentine poems that glows, Nadiya !!! (#7) - One winning proposals in my eyes :) - hug // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your lovely words... lov, nad!
Date: 2/2/2015 2:21:00 PM
sooo romantic - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Jan... lov n hugs
Date: 2/2/2015 8:16:00 AM
This was absolutely beautiful! Nicely done!
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Casarah...
Date: 2/2/2015 3:49:00 AM
Nad, check the rules. You have to write 2 haiku 5-7-5 and one Questionku 4/5/6 in the contest.Love>rajat
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Date: 2/2/2015 3:52:00 AM
Thank you Rajat.. my first time writing In this form... ll make the changes...

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