my valentine

 in his gaze I see
love reflecting back to me -
his sweet smiling eyes
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Beaufort Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 4:42 PM
Andrea, eye contact does tell a lot and eyes do really smile. We hope all is well. You are also making me smile.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day...........
Healey Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 8:29 AM
Nicely done, Andrea.
Famuyiwa Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 9:17 PM
Congrats.
Kitchin Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 12:58 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet senryu.
Hind Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 9:09 PM
Awww sweet! :)
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 2:30 AM
- A lovely Valentine poem, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 5:31 PM
It's nice when the woman says beautiful things about the man she adores ;)
Rodgers Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Dear Andrea, How sweet and lovely is your senryu. I really enjoyed reading this wonder write this morning. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Read Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 1:55 AM
Hi Andrea that is so sweet. xx
Parker Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 10:26 PM
Sweet sweet.....remember the little valentine heart hard candies???
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 8:46 PM
Yes, eyes smile and swoon..oh the eyes…aye yi yi! ;)
Singh Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:31 PM
A beautiful moment captured.Lovely.
Godwin Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Verra purdy, a sweet write from a Sweetie. Look for a message from me in your regular email. Not soup mail. So much to share ... CayCay
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Ahh!! How romantic. I hope you share with your husband on a nice homemade card. Sara K
One Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:54 PM
awww so sweet and romantic dear Andrea.. such a romantic you are..
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:22 PM
So lovely romantic Senryu!
Empress Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:18 PM
So romantic and beautiful sweet andrea, ah its a blessing to see love and find warmth within ones gaze. Best wishes in the contest.
Rolland Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:03 PM
so sweet poem, he loves you for sure, enjoyed
Mckeithan Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 11:23 AM
Wonderful senryu. Good luck in contest
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