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My Vagabond Drifting Wood

A tree in the hills felled by the summer storm river in spate carries from cascade to cascade. Deskinned trunk haltingly moves to the bank, sticks in mud and boulder the water deposits. Next rains come, the river sweeps the banks. The log floats in delight, starts to travel again, likes to reach adrift the destination unknown. Unanchored, it doesn’t know what the past is. My life uprooted by the squall of rough times drifts like a floating log, finds no hands to hold, seeks new course for an uncertain end to reach. Unpossessed, I don’t know what attachment is. I float on freedom, time takes me in its course, I make my mooring, hold on as long as I want. People say I am a vagabond, a fallen drift wood. Unbound, I’m glad, my memory has no memory. September 24, 2017. Contest : Form V - Verse Me a Poem. Sponsor : Broken Wings.

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Date: 10/6/2017 6:46:00 AM
Subimal, A wonderfully written piece. Nice use of personification, and imagery.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/6/2017 6:48:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and appreciating,James.
Date: 10/5/2017 4:39:00 PM
I enjoyed your metaphors here, Subimal. Beautifully written and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 10/6/2017 6:49:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and appreciating, Sandra.
Date: 10/5/2017 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice win ... a very well written poem ...
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Date: 10/4/2017 6:20:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned poem !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/4/2017 11:27:00 PM
Thank you BW for finding the poem worthy of recognition.
Date: 9/26/2017 3:29:00 PM
A metaphorically beautiful poem, Subimal. I see a free spirit that knows no attachment, yet enjoying life to the full...lucky you! Regards // paul
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/4/2017 11:27:00 PM
Thank you, Paul for your comments.
Date: 9/24/2017 11:22:00 PM
Nicely balanced verse ... Nice metaphorical expression ... Enjoyed reading it ... good luck with the contest ...
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/25/2017 12:22:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation.
Date: 9/24/2017 8:04:00 AM
A very interesting and thought provoking poem to read. Well done Subimal ! Good luck in the contest. This is creative :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/25/2017 12:21:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I greatly appreciate your comments.

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