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My Vagabond Drifting Wood

A tree in the hills felled by the summer storm
river in spate carries from cascade to cascade.
Deskinned trunk haltingly moves to the bank,
sticks in mud and boulder the water deposits.

Next rains come, the river sweeps the banks.
The log floats in delight, starts to travel again,
likes to reach adrift the destination unknown.
Unanchored, it doesn’t know what the past is.

My life uprooted by the squall of rough times
drifts like a floating log, finds no hands to hold,
seeks new course for an uncertain end to reach.
Unpossessed, I don’t know what attachment is.

I float on freedom, time takes me in its course,
I make my mooring, hold on as long as I want.
People say I am a vagabond, a fallen drift wood.
Unbound, I’m glad, my memory has no memory.

September 24, 2017.
Contest : Form V - Verse Me a Poem.
Sponsor : Broken Wings.
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Inman Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Subimal, A wonderfully written piece. Nice use of personification, and imagery.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:48 AM
Thank you for visiting and appreciating,James.
Haight Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 4:39 PM
I enjoyed your metaphors here, Subimal. Beautifully written and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Thank you for visiting and appreciating, Sandra.
Gupta Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your nice win ... a very well written poem ...
La France Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:20 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned poem !
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 11:27 PM
Thank you BW for finding the poem worthy of recognition.
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 3:29 PM
A metaphorically beautiful poem, Subimal. I see a free spirit that knows no attachment, yet enjoying life to the full...lucky you! Regards // paul
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 11:27 PM
Thank you, Paul for your comments.
Gupta Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Nicely balanced verse ... Nice metaphorical expression ... Enjoyed reading it ... good luck with the contest ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 12:22 AM
Thank you for your appreciation.
Sands Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:04 AM
A very interesting and thought provoking poem to read. Well done Subimal ! Good luck in the contest. This is creative :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 12:21 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I greatly appreciate your comments.
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