Tanya Harrington Poet Rictameter

My Unease

unease
unfamiliar
disruptive crowded rooms
apprehension of the unknown
heightened awareness, chest tight, heart pounding
quick shallow breaths, muscles flexing
nerves alert, thoughts racing
change of routine
unease

TLH  © 07-01-2012

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Robert Pettit July 3, 2012 at 9:46 PM A great rictameter description of extreme stress.

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2012 at 8:51 PM You described the feeling very well. it can be all of that and more!

Russell Sivey July 2, 2012 at 11:43 AM Wow, I too felt the unease flowing through your awesome write! It beats with every heartbeat, tightening the chest, creating a great feel of unease! What an outstanding and tremendous poem my friend! Great work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2012 at 11:04 AM Rictameter.....never read it before - well done Tanya! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2012 at 10:52 AM i can feel the unease racing through your lines, tanya... well formed piece with such gripping mood!... yes! :) huggs!