My Uncle Is Dead

He came into my room glowering.
I rolled my eyes, but inside my head, silently, so he could not see.
He comes to me daily, to get away from his “mean” teacher.
I am feeling a bit mean myself.

What happened?
She is teaching math, she is looking mean at me, I hate her.
I know this child well; he truly just wants to play in a sand pile.
And he despises math like I despise math; I keep this thought a secret.

We play in the sand pile and he says “My uncle died.”
I ask him “when?”
He says “we don’t know, we have not found his body yet.”
I said “How do you know he died?”

He glares at me. “Mom and me went to his house this weekend.
We knocked and knocked, and no one came.”
I am on board so far.
Mom pointed to Rex’s water bowl and said “You know what this means don’t you?”

Rex is his dog?
Head nod.
“What did it mean?”
“It means Uncle Tom is dead. He would never let Rex run out of water.”

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Date: 10/24/2021 10:03:00 AM
Amazing. I love the story, Caren. This kid has his priorities in order! LOL Well...maybe not.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2021 2:12:00 AM
I just have to keep my tongue in my head and try not to laugh some days; this really did happen. His mother told him that his uncle must be dead; he was seven.
Date: 10/24/2021 8:10:00 AM
Caren, your imagination never fails to amaze me. Love the ending of this one.
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Date: 10/25/2021 2:13:00 AM
Thank you Jenna but this one was true.
Date: 10/24/2021 6:00:00 AM
He wold make a great detective :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/25/2021 2:13:00 AM
Wouldn't he though? Ha!
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