My Umbrella

The thing that we always carry,
It’s a big help in our life every day,
Protect us from the heat of the sun,
So that our skin will not be burn.

Whatever season will come my way,
Even if the weather will be rainy or sunny,
This little thing is in my bag anyway,
It is a blessing and a life saver to me.

Colorful as a rainbow,
I hold you with care you know,
My life is not complete without you,
My umbrella, I depend on you I always do.

March 25, 2014
4th Place winner
"Umbrella Contest"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/15/2023 9:58:00 PM
My congratulations on this winning poem of yours Ma'am Bukang Liwayway! It's a late commendation on my late arrival here but your work as a poetess is not unrecognized. More Power to You!
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Date: 9/2/2014 5:34:00 AM
great piece Maria, really so simple but so profound and as you say we always need a umbrella especially here in Scoland where it rains a lot of the time, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 5/31/2014 9:52:00 AM
Very nice, Maria.
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Date: 5/21/2014 6:46:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Congrats on your win. Tfs
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Date: 5/14/2014 6:46:00 PM
what a wonderful umbrella your have. enjoyed reading your poem tonight. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 5/9/2014 11:14:00 PM
Love this. Definitely my style. -Juli-Michelle
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Date: 4/4/2014 9:08:00 PM
Nice write, Maria! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/4/2014 3:58:00 PM
Praise for the umbrella with this winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2014 10:27:00 PM
MARIA, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/3/2014 12:32:00 PM
Maria, :) Congratulations, wonderful winning Umbrella poem. Enjoyed my BFF's winning list..... luv LINDA
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Date: 4/3/2014 5:00:00 AM
My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, maria
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:33:00 AM
- Hey Maria - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 10:49:00 AM
My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my very dear friend Maria! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora
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Date: 3/31/2014 6:41:00 PM
what a nice entry for the umbrella contest. Good analogy with a person you can depend on!!
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Date: 3/31/2014 8:09:00 AM
- I never carry an umbrella - even though we have MUCH rain - A nice poem to contest Maria - Good luck ..... hope you win :) - Have a lovely week my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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