My Two Miracles

Two of my clocks had stubbornly stopped,
My son had worked on them for years.
They didn't respond to his tinkering
He said they had worn out gears.

Sometime after God had taken him,
I walked by the cuckoo clock.
I impulsively swung the pendulum
And was startled by a strong tick-tock.

I was so surprised, I said aloud,
"I know you have fixed it Son,
Now just to please your mother
Would you start the other one? (And he did)


Won 2nd place
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Freeman Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Awesome poem win Joyce, Sincere Agape, Moses
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February 16, 2010 at 4:48 AM
That is a miracle...and I have heard of many similar things happening. The Vail is close to us. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the "Believe in Miracles" contest Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. (I'm sorry to be so late at this, but congratulations are still in order. Smiling and apologetic, Dane Ann
Foster Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 6:07 PM
Usually we hear of clocks stopping when a loved one passes away, in this case, just the opposite . A marvelous write....congratulations....Margaret
Dufresne Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 3:20 AM
What a smiler this one is Joyce. Such a gift! Congratulations-Robert
Strand Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 1:08 AM
Congrats on your success in the ontest Joyce.Rgds Brian
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February 4, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Joyce, this is simply divine. A very well deserved win! andrea
Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Joyce, congratulations on your success in Carolyn's contest >> James
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February 4, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Joyce, I was telling friends about this amazing miracle. It gave me chills reading it and you wrote it so well! Congratulations on your win. Love, carolyn
Kopp Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 9:37 AM
I got chills with this one. Thanks for sharing it!
Brown Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 8:18 PM
Congrats Joyce on your second place win in the Miracles contest... wonderful poem for a wonderful win.. luv.. Linda-Marie... appreciate your well wishes also..
Richards Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 5:37 PM
What a joy to read, Joyce! A different kind of miracle! Such fun! ~ Carrie
Culverhouse Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Strange, hope it gave you encouragement!! thanks for your comments on my works, it is encouraging. :)
Freeman Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Awesome feeling of the adamantine particles running up and down my back bone Joyce. This one should set well within the contest. Sincerely, love, Moses
Strand Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 1:00 AM
Best wihes in the contest Joyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and observations.
Owens Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 6:39 PM
I love hearing about things that happen like this...Surely a miracle...Love it...Marty
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