My Turn

My turn
Empathetically I listen
And I do not even judge
Though the nonsense you’re explaining
Really doesn’t sway me much
But I still refrain from speaking
My face remains expressionless
As I calmly wait with patience
’Till you’re done telling your mess
And I even check my breathing
Is my chest heaving too high?
So I start to breathe much slower
It ain’t easy but I try
As I watch you, I feel pity
Though you’re lying, I don’t hate
I can see you sinking deeper
Just by how much you gesticulate
And your eyes are now wide open
As if they’re peering in the dark
You are pleading for compassion
But your performance lacks the spark
And the silence gets confusing
You’re now distracted by my stare
And you’re running out of fuel
That kept you boxing with just air
Now your energy has left you
And you feel so tired and weak
And then you finally fall silent
So now I get my turn to speak. 

Wendy Nipas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/8/2018 11:55:00 AM
Surely you gracefully ignored the unnecessary. Love the silence in the poem. Thanks
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 11/8/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Ibohal, and you're welcome.
Date: 10/22/2018 10:06:00 AM
A wise woman!
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 10/22/2018 7:03:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/16/2018 1:05:00 PM
Words, words, and more words. Then no words. Then silence. Then you better listen, cause it's my turn. Sort of running now. Like it.
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 10/16/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you. Lol
Date: 8/1/2018 6:54:00 AM
Interesting subject, Love how you weave your words so well..Harry
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 8/1/2018 6:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for your nice comment.
Date: 7/31/2018 10:04:00 AM
A wise write Wendy...A good message for all to read...All the best my friend
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 7/31/2018 11:13:00 AM
Thank you and all the best to you as well.
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