My Trusty Coat

My trusty coat is ages old.
For years, it’s kept me from the cold
But time is sometimes cruel, I find,
And to my coat, it’s not been kind.

The shoulder pads look out of style
(That’s been the case for quite a while)
And near the pocket, there’s a tear
Which I expect might make folks stare.

The lining I have had replaced
Ten years ago, so not a waste,
Yet now, alas, that’s ripping, too;
There’s nothing more that I can do.

Although this garment I do prize
It’s only worn for exercise
On morning walks with jogging pants
When no one gives a second glance.

I’ve other jackets, newer coats,
Though none would float as many boats
As this, but now I can’t deny
The time has come to say goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/27/2018 4:26:00 PM
Haha! I was bought up on frugality, so I keep clothing as long as possible, providing I don't stand out and stared at. Love the rhythm in this poem, Ilene. Best to you. / M
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:07:00 AM
I can relate. Even though you've had some quite a while it's hard to say goodbye!!!
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Date: 2/22/2018 5:59:00 PM
I swear you can make any subject charming and lovely Ilene. I loved this! : )
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Date: 2/22/2018 5:04:00 PM
I too have something old and tattered but I only wear it around the house. My wife will just not let me go out with it.
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