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My Trusty Coat

My trusty coat is ages old. For years, it’s kept me from the cold But time is sometimes cruel, I find, And to my coat, it’s not been kind. The shoulder pads look out of style (That’s been the case for quite a while) And near the pocket, there’s a tear Which I expect might make folks stare. The lining I have had replaced Ten years ago, so not a waste, Yet now, alas, that’s ripping, too; There’s nothing more that I can do. Although this garment I do prize It’s only worn for exercise On morning walks with jogging pants When no one gives a second glance. I’ve other jackets, newer coats, Though none would float as many boats As this, but now I can’t deny The time has come to say goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/27/2018 4:26:00 PM
Haha! I was bought up on frugality, so I keep clothing as long as possible, providing I don't stand out and stared at. Love the rhythm in this poem, Ilene. Best to you. / M
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:07:00 AM
I can relate. Even though you've had some quite a while it's hard to say goodbye!!!
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Date: 2/22/2018 5:59:00 PM
I swear you can make any subject charming and lovely Ilene. I loved this! : )
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Date: 2/22/2018 5:04:00 PM
I too have something old and tattered but I only wear it around the house. My wife will just not let me go out with it.
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