My True Love

My true love is like an apple tree planted in a forest of pine
Down next to a stream, where bees continously dine

In spring his white blossoms produce nectar
The aroma floats on the gentle breeze

He draws strength from living waters
And offers them to me

In summer he offers shade from the sun
With leaves of glossy green

Tiny apples begin to form
Drawing strength from the running stream

In fall he offers to one and all
The fruit upon his tree

A mixture of colors pleasing to the eye
For everyone to see

Drawing strength from the stream
His fruit fully matures

Everyone comes to feed upon the apples
That have with time truly endured
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haick Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 6:13 AM
Excellent imagery, Sara! What a song of praise! Thank you for writing this ...He draws strength from living waters and offers it to me. Reminds me of this favorite line from the Bible...Psalm 23 ..He leadeth me beside the still waters he restoreth my soul. Good work! your friend, Ladybug12
Cuyler Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 8:05 AM
thanks for commenting me on my poetry,and yours is outstanding no doubt about that may all your dreams continue to come true
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 12:14 AM
Beautiful couplet poem, Sarah! Nice use of words and the imagery is very nice. I really enjoyed reading it.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 4:50 PM
nicley penned, love renews!
Fraser Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Beautiful poem Sara, a lovely fresh write>>James
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 1:37 PM
a truley perfect write indeed. great use of lines and just love this really really great job
Strand Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 8:53 AM
Lovely poetry Sara.thanks for for your kind words and comments today.Rgds Brian
Owens Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 7:53 AM
Sara, Thanks for your poetry. I like all of your work...Marty
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