My Trip To Heaven

I'll never forget the dream I dreamt 
That reshaped my very being
   I have no doubt, need not attempt
Whole heartedly believing

   My soul left my body vacant
But not to my demise
   My imagination couldn't fake it
Too beautiful for human eyes

   Loving limbs cradled me
Hovering over my vain vessel
   Blind eyes could suddenly see
Two arms became my trestle

   My familiar surroundings vanished
Stripped bare of my possessions
   A state of calm, established
By undeserved discretion 

   I saw beauty like never before
Though it was there all along
   Kept safe behind an invisible door
Of angels in peaceful song

   I saw things as they stood
Without the shiny polish
   I'll tell you now, it wasn't good
Beneath the tree of knowledge

   The wind didn't feel like wind
As we flew through what we call the sky
   No beginning or end
A repeating lullaby 

   I recognized many faces
Though they weren't familiar at all
   I knew exactly who they were
Despite the faces that I saw

   We shared a warm embrace
They knew who I was too
   I was just piece of space 
But they could see right through

   Just then, like an epiphany
A lightbulb flipped it's switch
   A delightfully elegant symphony
At just the perfect pitch

   The angels parted, one by one
Revealing a magnificent figure
   Holy Ghost, father and son
The epitome of pure

   Though I  had no shell
I hit the floor
   Gravity aside, I fell
I wanted for nothing more

   My knees weren't knees at all
Only a perfect spirit
   Yet still I felt the fall
My ears could even hear it

   I can't remember what I saw
My eyes are too sinful, you see
   I know it was glorious and humbly raw
More than I expected it to be

   I awoke from my travels
Still seeing things where they stand
    When truth and time unravels
I'll see beauty once again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/4/2015 3:06:00 AM
excellent pen anna very beautifully painted trip
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Date: 6/3/2015 9:29:00 AM
Anna, I love how you described heaven here.. lots of verses in the Bible esp in the book of Revelation provides us how is heaven is.. !Inspiring and the end is just a good way to provoke the reader..~~olive eloisa =')
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Date: 6/2/2015 12:32:00 PM
Awesome imagery here revealing things I expect to see one day as well!
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:52:00 AM
This vision of heaven is a loving Christian affirmation with your personal poetic touch. Emile.
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:41:00 AM
nice revelation Anna, i want to have this dream too
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