My Trip To Heaven

I was on my way to Heaven one day
          or so I am told . . . but I was sent back
and I have a dream so beautiful often
it begins in a forest lush and green with dripping wetness
I am walking beside a flowing crystal stream
when, I hear my name being called-
          it floats among the canopy of trees swirling
and the voice is my mother's !
(I should mention mother is long dead)
               yet, I follow the sound, running 
and come to a golden bridge going into infinity
again mother's voice      a whisper now
     then . . .
I am at a golden gate looking through the bars
          beyond is a beautiful garden
where every flower imagined is growing wild
the sky is forever blue
and there is a stillness and utter peace
it fills me with a feeling I have never felt
               quite wonderful
birds fly and twitter and butterflies flutter
   bees buzz      and what is that delicious smell
and angels are singing
and is that my cat snowball and smudges
with mother and grandma?
I try to climb the gate . . . . I must get in
      I believe this is Heaven, oh yes exactly
what I always thought it would be 
but an angel appears murmuring_
                     muttering stop, STOP
       no, no, NO this is a mistake !
go back until it is time     not time for you
           and I am falling, falling, falling, falling
until, I wake in a hospital bed gasping please
                      I want to go back . . . to Heaven

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May 30, 2020


Poetry/Free Verse/my trip to Heaven
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1256-881-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, Heaven
sponsor, Regina Riddle

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Carber Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Was this a dream, Constance, or a near-death experience? I had an NDE 50 years ago so I know they are real--and sometimes we are sent back, by all accounts I've read.
La France Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 5:12 PM
LJ, thanks for visiting, this was a NDE and a recurring dream _Constance
Mishra Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Constance. Blessings and love :)
La France Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Aditi, thanks for the congratulations _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 10:22 PM
Back to say congratulations on your remarkable story poem!
La France Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:24 PM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations _Constance
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June 2, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Thank you so much for entering the contest, Constance. I loved your poem and wish you much love and blessings always, Gina
La France Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:23 PM
Gina, thanks for another inspiring contest and my placement _ Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 8:26 PM
I think it is possible to dream what heaven is really like. Your imagery is what I feel it will be like Constance. Beautiful! Congratulations on your wonderful second place win! Blessings xxoo
La France Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Connie, thanks for the beautiful and congratulations _ Constance
Kauffman Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 7:02 PM
Powerful words and pictures, Constance. This poem will stay with me as you have given me much to think about - especially in your last line that jolts us awake and back into this reality. Good luck in the contest.
La France Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Sam, thanks for visiting with the great comment _ Constance
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May 31, 2020 at 4:27 PM
These are beautiful images of Heaven, Constance. I believe God gives us glimpses of His glory with images that are calming and unique to each of us. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
La France Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Rhonda, thanks for the lovely message _ Constance
One Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Sounds like heaven.. nice poem my friend..
La France Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Silent, thanks for the compliment and visit _ Constance
Mishra Avatar
May 30, 2020 at 6:13 PM
That was a beautiful heaven Constance. I believe all of us wish to find that heaven with lovely forests and butterflies but they mean something to us only when we find our loved ones there. Best wishes for the contest :)
La France Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Aditi, thanks for the compliment and visit, appreciate _Constance
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