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My Translocated Tomorrow

On the rhythm of rolling waves of tidal time I float, drenched in the chromatic cadence of the setting sun. Before the ebb takes me beyond the misty horizon, I search for fervent anchorage on her seraphic shore. Through the slanted shower of the twilight shimmer, my fragile footprints follow her lengthening shadow, melting in mystic night under the mellow moonshine, forlorn alley of my dreams lights up in stardust spark. The new sun returns on the edge of color-splashed sky, sprinkles the splendor of spectral hue on drops of dew. In my malachite meadow no longer morose, I find her, sparkling like pearl with the patina of pristine fervor. At the lingering periphery of my lonesome present time, shades of grey dissolve, my beguiled senses don’t belie, haze lifts from dawning day, I see my tomorrow glow like 'a smile on her face and a gleam in her eye.' ('a smile on her face and a gleam in her eye' - Batter Up by Ever Roper) April 11, 2020 Contest : Poetic Lines From A Poetry Soup Poet - Eve Roper Sponsor : Silent One May 9, 2020 Contest : Brian's Choice 7, Any Form, Any Theme Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 4/13/2020 6:50:00 PM
wonderfully penned... congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 4/13/2020 2:11:00 PM
- A wonderful poetic poem ... as always, Subimal ... congratulations on your winning poem ... well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/13/2020 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations, Subimal, on first place! Great line: drenched in the chromatic drizzle of the setting sun.
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Date: 4/13/2020 11:18:00 AM
Stunning write, Subimal, the imagery is so vivid. I love each stanza of your poem. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/13/2020 8:45:00 AM
Love ‘seraphic shore’ ! Congrats on your number 1 placement! Many great ideas come rushing at me when I read it!
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Date: 4/13/2020 7:14:00 AM
This line was very popular in the contest.. IT seems to have inspired you.. Many people have used nature and you have done a wonderful poem here.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 4/11/2020 10:42:00 AM
Great interpretation and entry my friend...best of luck, stay safe and Happy Easter coming SSR...best wishes from the Wingster :o)
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