My Tranquil Drug

When I think about the woods I’m 
Humbled by the architecture of the naked trees
Solid, tranquil, every reaching as I climb
Higher towards the southerly breeze

In Beaulieu, when it rains mother can be seen
Dashing out between the showers to pull the weeds
She misses many stuck in between
Which the wind carries and the plant reseeds

At the river mouth the water turns 
And the swans take off graciously over the tide pool
The ducklings settle back into the ferns
Settle down hazy mist and make the evening cool

Strong floral scents carried far on a zephyr
Echoing sound of match point from the court
Baby calves playfully jump and softly nose the heifer
Hear their mooing chatter as they lightly cavort

The donkey foals have such big heads
Post-like legs with sturdy feet
They need big pillows for their beds
They look so cuddly and oh so sweet

Hey where’s the water gone? 
Someone’s pulled the plug
When will I see the return of the swan?
To my home, my tranquil drug

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/16/2016 10:14:00 AM
A lovely descriptive write Sarah.
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Date: 10/3/2016 11:23:00 PM
A true pastoral experience, Sarah. This poem bespeaks the serene side of nature. Your words have such a calming effect on the reader. You have a very deft touch in that regard. Continue expressing such harmonious views and you have me hooked on that mind-soothing tranquil drug as well. Love your style of writing, it's quite evocative. Keep the love and knowledge flowing. Much love and more love to you and yours.
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:21:00 AM
If this is an earthly experience, heaven's gonna be a puffy disappointment. Spirit is real. You've just refilled my tank.
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:34:00 AM
That's such a sweet thing to say, thank you ;-) I sat writing it up as I sit here now watching it all again. I'm addicted...
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