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My Toofy Gwin

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Tee-hee, I'm here again, jus' meef Wit' dimples shining, chub-chub cheeks Yous gotsta see my two new teef (Dough dey be dwibblin' lotsa leaks) Me hasn't got no udders yet But dese is purrfect side-by-side Dey always shiny, white and wet (And sometimes get my tungy tied) My bib is stain, dey make me dwizzle Fwum learnin' how to use 'em wight And when I talk my essez wizzle (Toof Fairy brung 'em late one night) Fer sher can't wait to really use 'em Cuz mama says dey shine my chin How I gotsta bite and chew some Grow more dandies for my gwin Oh how I wuv dese bwight new tings And mama wuvs 'em, I can tell She always waffs and always sings When I bite daddy ... make him yell! ~ 5th Place ~ in the "Baby Face What's You Thinkin' 2" Poetry Contest, James Edward Lee, Sr, Judge & Sponsor. (I used photograph number three)

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/5/2019 10:09:00 PM

G'day Gregory … at first I thought your heading referred to 'My Goofy Twin,' but was pleasantly surprised to read your delightful poem referring to a 'Toothy Grin.' Really enjoyed your humour - Lindsay

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/5/2019 10:24:00 PM

That's so very kind of you, Lindsay, and I thank you very much for the lovely comments ... this was a lot of fun to write, and I'm pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings! :-) <3

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 6/4/2019 5:17:00 PM

Thank you for your verse Gregory, Congrats on your placement in my contest.. Write On James

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/5/2019 10:23:00 PM

Thank you SO much, James, I am honored by my placement and humbled to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2019 1:28:00 PM

- Really sweet, Gregory :) - Congratulations on your great 5th place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/5/2019 10:22:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/3/2019 7:39:00 PM

Very darling, Gregory. Congrats on your win.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/5/2019 10:21:00 PM

Thanks so much, Line! :-) <3

John Lawless

Date: 5/20/2019 6:20:00 AM

Finally a poem with some teeth in it!... Love this ...thanks for the laughs...

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/5/2019 10:20:00 PM

Ha - well-said, John! Many kind thanks to you, my friend! :-)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/19/2019 7:37:00 AM

This is so darling! Whimsical and fun. Well done indeed. Exquisitely done Greg.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/5/2019 10:18:00 PM

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one, Caren, and I thank you very kindly for your comments! :-) <3

Jan Allison

Date: 5/19/2019 6:19:00 AM

oh how cute is this in so many ways greg, I do enjoy your humourous poems:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/5/2019 10:18:00 PM

Thank you SO much, Jan, you know how much your opinion means to me, especially in this genre ... so very appreciated, my friend! :-) <3