Gregory Richard Barden Poet Rhyme

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My Toofy Gwin

Tee-hee, I'm here again, jus' meef
          Wit' dimples shining, chub-chub cheeks
               Yous gotsta see my two new teef
     (Dough dey be dwibblin' lotsa leaks)

Me hasn't got no udders yet
          But dese is purrfect side-by-side
               Dey always shiny, white and wet
     (And sometimes get my tungy tied)

My bib is stain, dey make me dwizzle
          Fwum learnin' how to use 'em wight
               And when I talk my essez wizzle
     (Toof Fairy brung 'em late one night)

Fer sher can't wait to really use 'em
          Cuz mama says dey shine my chin
               How I gotsta bite and chew some
     Grow more dandies for my gwin

Oh how I wuv dese bwight new tings
          And mama wuvs 'em, I can tell
               She always waffs and always sings
     When I bite daddy ... make him yell!





~ 5th Place ~  in the "Baby Face What's You Thinkin' 2" Poetry Contest, James Edward Lee, Sr, Judge & Sponsor.

(I used photograph number three)

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Lindsay Laurie June 5, 2019 at 10:09 PM G'day Gregory … at first I thought your heading referred to 'My Goofy Twin,' but was pleasantly surprised to read your delightful poem referring to a 'Toothy Grin.' Really enjoyed your humour - Lindsay Gregory Richard Barden June 5, 2019 at 10:24 PM That's so very kind of you, Lindsay, and I thank you very much for the lovely comments ... this was a lot of fun to write, and I'm pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings! :-) <3

James Edward Lee Sr. June 4, 2019 at 5:17 PM Thank you for your verse Gregory, Congrats on your placement in my contest.. Write On James Gregory Richard Barden June 5, 2019 at 10:23 PM Thank you SO much, James, I am honored by my placement and humbled to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2019 at 1:28 PM - Really sweet, Gregory :) - Congratulations on your great 5th place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden June 5, 2019 at 10:22 PM Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier June 3, 2019 at 7:39 PM Very darling, Gregory. Congrats on your win. Gregory Richard Barden June 5, 2019 at 10:21 PM Thanks so much, Line! :-) <3

John Lawless May 20, 2019 at 6:20 AM Finally a poem with some teeth in it!... Love this ...thanks for the laughs... Gregory Richard Barden June 5, 2019 at 10:20 PM Ha - well-said, John! Many kind thanks to you, my friend! :-)

Caren Krutsinger May 19, 2019 at 7:37 AM This is so darling! Whimsical and fun. Well done indeed. Exquisitely done Greg. Gregory Richard Barden June 5, 2019 at 10:18 PM I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one, Caren, and I thank you very kindly for your comments! :-) <3

Jan Allison May 19, 2019 at 6:19 AM oh how cute is this in so many ways greg, I do enjoy your humourous poems:-) hugs jan xx Gregory Richard Barden June 5, 2019 at 10:18 PM Thank you SO much, Jan, you know how much your opinion means to me, especially in this genre ... so very appreciated, my friend! :-) <3