My Time

A very long time ago I created my time I created my window All I saw Was my time Seeing only what was Within was my soulmate It was my time This was all I saw I had love I had compassion I had passion I saw my soulmate Only what was Within my time Did I see When my time window Was emptied by one With my soulmate My time then changed Faded memories Appeared slowly I saw new beauty After the omission I had new passions I searched for new love A fog was removed Seeing beauty Not seen before the omission Kept me That way

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/11/2024 6:01:00 PM

This is a great poem. Love can make a person too dependent. Allow room for growth.

Wilbert Webb
Date: 8/12/2024 3:01:00 AM

Hilda: This was one of the quickest thought transfers I have ever written. Sitting watching TV and from there to the keyboard. I write for cure as "growth", here would be breaking the rule.