My Tickler Erupted

Good thing I was seated coz she blowed my mind Prepared to wait out the dark days till the sun again shined My tickler erupted Twas a bit rusted The joy was so intense my eyeballs became unaligned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 8:47 AM
My my, imagine if she didn’t just blow your mind!
Ellison Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Can't go there... my mind would shatter and I would go blind!!! (dream along with me!) Good morning Mr. Wesrcoast guy!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:42 AM
I have to ask, what was she wearing? ;D, Good morning my sweet excitable Jack! xomo <3
Ellison Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 8:07 AM
She had ginger hair... have no idea what she was wearing!!! Good morning sweet thing! Love love love from T.O. XOXOX
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