My Three Wishes

If I were to be granted three wishes today.
     I'd wish for a mind that would stay clear always.

I'd wish that in the beginning, man had not sinned.
     So that the world wouldn't be in all the trouble it's in.

I'd wish for some toys, so that we could all play.
     And be happy and carefree, together always.

So if these three wishes could possibly come true.
     Then living would be wonderful and we'd never be blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/22/2010 5:06:00 AM
I appreciate your help Marty and this poem is very nice..if only wishes could come true..Satin Doll Diva
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:12:00 AM
Three wonderful wishes Marty, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/1/2010 9:00:00 PM
Simple and sweet. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:08:00 AM
short but full, liked your wishes and congrats on your HM
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:42:00 PM
Congrats Marty on your HM in Amy's Wishes contest.. I knew it first time I read it my friend so u enjoy this very special honor bestowed tonight and hope u are feeling much better now..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/29/2010 10:18:00 AM
Very nice poem, Marty....I wish you good luck in Amy's contest...Peace, audrey
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Date: 4/28/2010 8:31:00 PM
Nice poem Marty. And may your wishes all come true!
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:52:00 PM
Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/28/2010 1:15:00 PM
So very true Marty and good luck in Amy's contest... my entry is The Magic Trio ..hope u are OK as u said u have not been online so much... if u need a friend..here I am.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/28/2010 12:45:00 PM
Sigh, Im with you on these wishes. Good luck in the contest. BG
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