My Thoughts Exactly

Staring out the kitchen window,
I watch as two butterflies flit between 
the flowers, their colors are brilliant
reflecting the morning sun creating a soft 
pastel glow as I sip my first 
cup of coffee of the day

You are still asleep as I let 
my mind wander to the plans we have 
made for today, our special spot at the lake,
a picnic lunch under the shade of the 
old maple tree I carved our initials in long ago,
I even bought your favorite wine 

Driving to our destination, you singing along
with the radio, the wind blowing through 
your dark brown hair,
that beautiful smile enchanting 
me at every turn as I fall in love again
a thousand times over

We’ll relax allowing the day 
to pass by slowly, 
finding shapes in the fluffy clouds,
skipping stones on the clear water,
spending the hours sharing  
all of the beauty nature has to offer 

A more perfect day I can not envision, as you 
sneak up behind me and putting your arms 
around my waist, kiss me on neck then whisper in my ear, 
“I want you, can we just stay home today and play?”
As I turn to face you I answer wearing a huge smile… 
“That’s exactly what I was thinking”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 9:30 AM
You painted a romantic scene but the romance didn't need the scene
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November 30, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Thanks so much my friend for your kindness. I always appreciate your visits.
Vinson Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:26 AM
You rock, Chris - there is a velvet cable pulling me through this poem, always wanting to see what comes next.
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November 30, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Thanks so much Doug for your wonderful comment. I am grateful for your visit this morning
Sands Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 7:59 AM
But, But...Chris...that wasn't what you were exactly thinking ! lol
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November 30, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Well...maybe it is what I was wishing. :) Thanks so very much my sweet friend for always bringing a smile to my day.
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November 30, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Your coffee brand needs to make this a TV commercial. Such an idyllic description of the sort of day we all dream of. Then a bit of a twist for an ending ... very fun. Enjoyed it, Dave
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November 30, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Thanks so much Dave, not sure that would work out. I drink Tim Horton's coffee and that is a Canadian brand but I live in in the states. :) I appreciate your kind words this morning sir.
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November 30, 2016 at 7:23 AM
As long as you're not playing X-Box, or whatever they call it these days! Yes, it matters not where you are but whom you are with! And it sounds well and truly that you are in love my friend. Great write, Chris!
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November 30, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Nope, no Xbox on this morning. :)
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November 30, 2016 at 7:19 AM
Hi Chris: Beautiful poem and foreplay (ha ha)
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November 30, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Thanks so very much Ralph. Yep, I guess it I that. :)
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