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My Thoughts Exactly

Staring out the kitchen window, I watch as two butterflies flit between the flowers, their colors are brilliant reflecting the morning sun creating a soft pastel glow as I sip my first cup of coffee of the day You are still asleep as I let my mind wander to the plans we have made for today, our special spot at the lake, a picnic lunch under the shade of the old maple tree I carved our initials in long ago, I even bought your favorite wine Driving to our destination, you singing along with the radio, the wind blowing through your dark brown hair, that beautiful smile enchanting me at every turn as I fall in love again a thousand times over We’ll relax allowing the day to pass by slowly, finding shapes in the fluffy clouds, skipping stones on the clear water, spending the hours sharing all of the beauty nature has to offer A more perfect day I can not envision, as you sneak up behind me and putting your arms around my waist, kiss me on neck then whisper in my ear, “I want you, can we just stay home today and play?” As I turn to face you I answer wearing a huge smile… “That’s exactly what I was thinking”

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Date: 11/30/2016 9:30:00 AM
You painted a romantic scene but the romance didn't need the scene
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 9:53:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend for your kindness. I always appreciate your visits.
Date: 11/30/2016 8:26:00 AM
You rock, Chris - there is a velvet cable pulling me through this poem, always wanting to see what comes next.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Doug for your wonderful comment. I am grateful for your visit this morning
Date: 11/30/2016 7:59:00 AM
But, But...Chris...that wasn't what you were exactly thinking ! lol
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 9:50:00 AM
Well...maybe it is what I was wishing. :) Thanks so very much my sweet friend for always bringing a smile to my day.
Date: 11/30/2016 7:28:00 AM
Your coffee brand needs to make this a TV commercial. Such an idyllic description of the sort of day we all dream of. Then a bit of a twist for an ending ... very fun. Enjoyed it, Dave
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Dave, not sure that would work out. I drink Tim Horton's coffee and that is a Canadian brand but I live in in the states. :) I appreciate your kind words this morning sir.
Date: 11/30/2016 7:23:00 AM
As long as you're not playing X-Box, or whatever they call it these days! Yes, it matters not where you are but whom you are with! And it sounds well and truly that you are in love my friend. Great write, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 9:48:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Nope, no Xbox on this morning. :)
Date: 11/30/2016 7:19:00 AM
Hi Chris: Beautiful poem and foreplay (ha ha)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 9:47:00 AM
Thanks so very much Ralph. Yep, I guess it I that. :)

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