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This is  my invented form: 7/5 Trochee (a type of Quatrain)

Today I would never want angel food because I am more into chocolate and carmel type desserts!

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My Teenage Birthday Cake When I was a teenager a long time ago, there was a dessert to which I could not say no. I can’t say the reason why it had seemed so great, for it’s not a cake that I’m craving as of late. Those times when my birthday came, I begged Mom to make -not chocolate or carrot - but angel food cake! Mother made it for me, for it was my wish - pink-frosted, served with ice cream, it was just delish! I don’t eat desserts these days, but if offered one, better than that angel food, I’d want sticky bun! April 30, 2018 For Jamie Pan's "Jamie's interesting Contest 3" Multiple Element Topic: 2. a dessert, a memory, and someone in your family

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Date: 5/1/2018 11:10:00 AM
Great form and a unique theme for the contest. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/1/2018 9:27:00 AM
Andrea, I like this form; I came across it last week when I was doing my Trijan Refrain. I am going to try it soon... Best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 4/30/2018 8:30:00 PM
Andrea, hm; dang, I was just about to have a portion of this "Angel food cake" with a dollop of ice cream, guess I'll be munching all by my lonesome...*sm...cute write dear poet !
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Date: 4/30/2018 6:50:00 PM
Excellent! I truly love Angel food cake with fluffy butter icing, and I eat every chance I get. lol!
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Date: 4/30/2018 6:03:00 PM
Cute and delicious, Andrea.
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Date: 4/30/2018 5:38:00 PM
A tasty treat of a poem Andrea.
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Date: 4/30/2018 4:45:00 PM
Andrea, I think young girls like the name "Angel Food," for I used to ask for it as well. It's interesting that today we both prefer chocolate (or the sticky bun). Your delightful poem made me hungry! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 4/30/2018 4:28:00 PM
Don't know why, but the song 'You must have been a beautiful baby' ran through my mind when reading this Gem..
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Date: 4/30/2018 3:59:00 PM
Sweet memories..no matter the type of cake! Best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 4/30/2018 1:54:00 PM
well that's one way to get a rush, a sticky bun, just dripping with sugar...you may not want the angel food cake but it is healthier...good luck
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/30/2018 2:34:00 PM
You should have seen me in my youth. Five donuts was nothing for me. I'd eat my whole sack of Trick or treat candy within a few days. It had no effect on me or my behavior, which parents often blame on sugar!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/30/2018 2:33:00 PM
Frederic, I think last time I had sticky bun was two years ago at a buffet place! Like I said, I rarely eat desserts, but when I DO, I go ALL OUT!

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