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My Tears

Without persons there would not be a tear Of wells they spring forth of emotions clear What be purpose so personal a tear Running in river’s emotions so clear Emotions of a mother brings a tear Cuddling newborn baby very dear Neglected child, poor misfortunes not mild Borne in broken homes of chaotic wild Salute of veterans brings many tears Sitting without their legs in their wheelchairs Their sacrifices visually clear Their freedom for ours, something very dear Their salty drops of water drop in beers Taverns of lonely hearts, tokens of Cheers Tear lotions, giving emotions of dove Consciences would soon sear over without love Little bitty tears spoil the acts of clowns When final act of life’s curtain comes down Salty tears neat, when life produces treat Tear summative blessings of life be sweet May we live and learn as tear rivers burn As human faults, failures and pleasures churn Let us measure our treasures by tears lost As life measures our pleasures, counting the cost!! =============================== Destroyer ~ Poet Contest Name:any poem goes......

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Date: 4/26/2011 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest . I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2011 2:23:00 PM
Lot's of tears! Congrad's on your fine effort winning. Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2011 2:20:00 PM
Warmest congrats to you my friend on your winning poem! Beautifully written Couplet! Thank you once again for your thoughtful congrats, so very kind of you. love, shar
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:59:00 AM
Awesome John, loved how you utilised the different tears, congratulations on your win and a blessed Easter to you ;)
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Date: 4/22/2011 10:44:00 AM
amazing write here John.Congrats on your win--kash
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Date: 4/22/2011 7:36:00 AM
Heart touching and filled of truth and deep feelings.....life measures our pleasures, and counts the cost...well said, John! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, john
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:19:00 AM
Congrats Moses my friend on your amazing win in HG's contest on tears.. a great expressive piece to fill the heart and soul with emotion luv.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:36:00 PM
john, I like how you covered many different types of tears. Very nicely done. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:52:00 PM
I loved your write especially the last stanza. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:28:00 PM
Congratulaltions on your win in this contest. Very neatly done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:21:00 PM
Dear John Moses, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 3rd Place Win LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry ( HG )
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:53:00 PM
YOu sure described a variety of tears. I am sure this should do well in the contest, john. Hope you are doing well this week!
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Date: 4/3/2011 10:45:00 AM
A very touching depiction of life's many endeavours. Wish your win, Gautami
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Date: 4/2/2011 4:44:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this very descriptive work of life's happening that bring those tears...Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:22:00 AM
I love the expression we live and learn as tear rivers burn,,,, nice expressions on the tears with various emotions.. John. Good luck.
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:39:00 AM
a rare treat so touching, john... tears are healing! winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:50:00 PM
I like your poem very much, John, tears, tears, tears, so many, this is something we humans all share, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 4/1/2011 7:11:00 PM
my eyes have been puffy...maybe I need to let them leak out some. ??
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