My Sweet Shereen

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My Gorgeous daughter, Shereen Natalie Ghali

How is it that you're beautiful
I really do not know
Your dad and I are average
we do not have your glow

Could it be true, some goddess genes
got somehow in the mix
When you walk by, I see the eyes
Of all the men transfix

You've got the curves; you've got the class,
and girl you have appeal
I'm sure those boys who see you near
Just wonder if you're real

I know I'm just a silly mom,
who likes to praise and dote
But when I see you next to me
I cannot help but gloat

This Mama Bear is happy for
her daughter is a Queen
and like her name, she's very sweet
my darling girl, Shereen

Eileen Manassian

Shereen is a Persian name which means "sweet" :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/1/2017 9:06:00 AM
She descended from a Warrior Princess so how could she not be gorgeous! Great poem Eileen. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 8:10:00 AM
I treasure your post, Richard. It brings my heart great joy.
Date: 10/31/2017 4:55:00 PM
oh, eileen, this is so beautiful! your daughter is just gorgeous and, despite the fact that you put yourself down, you are too! shereen should feel so good reading this poem...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, dear. I did read it to her while we were Skyping. She was happy. :) You are very kind, dear. Sending lots of hugs.......
Date: 10/31/2017 3:44:00 PM
- A beautiful young lady, Eileen - Hope all is well with you all - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 10:58:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine, dear. You warm my page with your light. :)
Date: 10/31/2017 2:40:00 PM
This just confirms exactly where she gets her beauty! From you! This is such a Shereen and lovely poem! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 10:59:00 AM
Awwwww....how sweet, Arthur. You make me smile. Loved that lost line...a shereen poem. You got it!
Date: 10/31/2017 2:37:00 PM
What a lovely tribute, and having seen her photo I know she's a stunner just like her lovely mum:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 11:00:00 AM
Hugs, Jan. You certainly know how to make this heart of mine smile. Sending lots of hugs...
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