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My sweet fairy dream

My sweet fairy dream, blossoms of my glee, In your embrace unfold desires of night When donning bold smile you answer my plea My sweet fairy dream Oh! how you paint splendorous day so bright On blue morning skies for romance to spree Where parable of sweethearts passions write Blazing with glory where sun greets the sea While golden arc glimmers in mauve delight Spanning love wings, oh, how you uplift me! My sweet fairy dream August 8, 2021 Form: Roundel Ten syllables per line; refrain: five syllables Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1 To 14 lines Contest

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Date: 1/13/2022 7:49:00 PM
beautiful! what a way with words.
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Date: 11/23/2021 8:21:00 AM
I stay awestruck before your poetic excellence.... no exaggeration ! Proud of you !
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Date: 11/3/2021 3:08:00 PM
Excellent write my friend well crafted
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Date: 9/16/2021 4:42:00 PM
very good writing in this form! I really like this one, Vijay! Congrats on your win I see you got too.
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Date: 9/12/2021 7:16:00 AM
Went for a blind pick on your list Vijay, came across this gem, love it.
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Date: 8/26/2021 3:41:00 PM
WoW! Vijay, This is so beautiful and well written. It's so romantic as well. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/16/2021 1:52:00 PM
Lovely... Ann
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Date: 8/12/2021 6:01:00 PM
A sweet fairy romance! Lovely words, Vijay!
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Date: 8/12/2021 2:10:00 PM
Vijay, i see congratulations with this intense splendorous write were due before you actually got them, I could of said, well I knew this would be a win! A cute romantic fairy write! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/11/2021 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Vijay! A lovely poem! BW ~ Mala
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Mala--much appreciate.
Date: 8/11/2021 6:56:00 AM
Gloriously romantic, my dearest friend, Vijay! I adore it! Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.
Date: 8/11/2021 6:40:00 AM
You did the form well Vijay, Best for a top win...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 8/10/2021 2:37:00 AM
Enjoyed this well written roundel, Vijay:) beautiful fairy dream:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 6:00:00 AM
Thank you Jo. Much appreciate.
Date: 8/9/2021 3:41:00 PM
You have me spinning in circles here, well delivered roundel , :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 6:00:00 AM
Thank you Vienna--much appreciate.
Date: 8/9/2021 11:03:00 AM
- So beautiful, Vijay ... the lines flow like a magical dream :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 2:35:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 8/9/2021 4:26:00 AM
Oh, I enjoyed this so much. It is inspiring, uplifting and brings such happiness. ! Very well written. A Fave for me. I hope you have a beautiful day :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:37:00 AM
That is so wonderful to hear from you, Heidi. Glad you liked the poem. You are the expert in this form (Poetry Soup says that)--so I am honored to receive a FAVE from you. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.
Date: 8/9/2021 4:24:00 AM
Romance flows like midnight mist in your dreamy piece Vijay! I thoroughly enjoyed it !! Good Luck !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:34:00 AM
Glad to hear that Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 8/9/2021 4:09:00 AM
This reads so well, romantic and beautiful it makes the heart smile...Delice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:33:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the words, Delice. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 8/9/2021 1:57:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful rondel, There's romance and passion in every stanza. An incredible beautiful rondel.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:32:00 AM
I appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many many thanks.
Date: 8/9/2021 12:18:00 AM
A very romantic verse Vijay, you write about romance so well. If it's for a contest good luck. Hope you're well. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:32:00 AM
So very kind of you Tom. Thank you for being there for everyone. Much appreciate as always.
Date: 8/8/2021 6:55:00 PM
Vijay, this is SO lovely and sweet. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:31:00 AM
Thank you Janice. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 8/8/2021 5:49:00 PM
"Spanning love wings, you uplift me!" And that is how it should be. This is so beautiful and dreamy. Your words whisper sweet romance, with a hint of passion. I am smiling. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:30:00 AM
Always a joy to read your feedback, Brandy. Much appreciate your smile my friend. Many thanks.