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My Sweet Fairy Dream

My sweet fairy dream, blossoms of my glee, In your embrace unfold desires of night When donning bold smile you answer my plea My sweet fairy dream Oh! how you paint splendorous day so bright On blue morning skies for romance to spree Where parable of sweethearts passions write Blazing with glory where sun greets the sea While golden arc glimmers in mauve delight Spanning love wings, oh, how you uplift me! My sweet fairy dream August 8, 2021 Form: Roundel Ten syllables per line; refrain: five syllables Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1 To 14 lines Contest

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Karen Croft

Date: 1/13/2022 7:49:00 PM

beautiful! what a way with words.

Valsa George

Date: 11/23/2021 8:21:00 AM

I stay awestruck before your poetic excellence.... no exaggeration ! Proud of you !

Al Juman

Date: 11/3/2021 3:08:00 PM

Excellent write my friend well crafted

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2021 4:42:00 PM

very good writing in this form! I really like this one, Vijay! Congrats on your win I see you got too.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/12/2021 7:16:00 AM

Went for a blind pick on your list Vijay, came across this gem, love it.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/26/2021 3:41:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, This is so beautiful and well written. It's so romantic as well. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Ann Foster

Date: 8/16/2021 1:52:00 PM

Lovely... Ann

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/12/2021 6:01:00 PM

A sweet fairy romance! Lovely words, Vijay!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/12/2021 2:10:00 PM

Vijay, i see congratulations with this intense splendorous write were due before you actually got them, I could of said, well I knew this would be a win! A cute romantic fairy write! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/11/2021 7:45:00 AM

Congratulations, Vijay! A lovely poem! BW ~ Mala

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2021 3:42:00 PM

Thank you Mala--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/11/2021 6:56:00 AM

Gloriously romantic, my dearest friend, Vijay! I adore it! Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2021 3:42:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.

Joseph May

Date: 8/11/2021 6:40:00 AM

You did the form well Vijay, Best for a top win...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2021 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/10/2021 2:37:00 AM

Enjoyed this well written roundel, Vijay:) beautiful fairy dream:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Jo. Much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/9/2021 3:41:00 PM

You have me spinning in circles here, well delivered roundel , :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Vienna--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/9/2021 11:03:00 AM

- So beautiful, Vijay ... the lines flow like a magical dream :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/9/2021 4:26:00 AM

Oh, I enjoyed this so much. It is inspiring, uplifting and brings such happiness. ! Very well written. A Fave for me. I hope you have a beautiful day :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:37:00 AM

That is so wonderful to hear from you, Heidi. Glad you liked the poem. You are the expert in this form (Poetry Soup says that)--so I am honored to receive a FAVE from you. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/9/2021 4:24:00 AM

Romance flows like midnight mist in your dreamy piece Vijay! I thoroughly enjoyed it !! Good Luck !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:34:00 AM

Glad to hear that Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/9/2021 4:09:00 AM

This reads so well, romantic and beautiful it makes the heart smile...Delice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:33:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed the words, Delice. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/9/2021 1:57:00 AM

Incredibly beautiful rondel, There's romance and passion in every stanza. An incredible beautiful rondel.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:32:00 AM

I appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/9/2021 12:18:00 AM

A very romantic verse Vijay, you write about romance so well. If it's for a contest good luck. Hope you're well. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:32:00 AM

So very kind of you Tom. Thank you for being there for everyone. Much appreciate as always.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/8/2021 6:55:00 PM

Vijay, this is SO lovely and sweet. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:31:00 AM

Thank you Janice. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/8/2021 5:49:00 PM

"Spanning love wings, you uplift me!" And that is how it should be. This is so beautiful and dreamy. Your words whisper sweet romance, with a hint of passion. I am smiling. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2021 5:30:00 AM

Always a joy to read your feedback, Brandy. Much appreciate your smile my friend. Many thanks.