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My Sweet Fairy Dream

My sweet fairy dream, blossoms of my glee,
In your embrace unfold desires of night
When donning bold smile you answer my plea
My sweet fairy dream

Oh! how you paint splendorous day so bright
On blue morning skies for romance to spree
Where parable of sweethearts passions write

Blazing with glory where sun greets the sea
While golden arc glimmers in mauve delight
Spanning love wings, oh, how you uplift me!
My sweet fairy dream

August 8, 2021
Form: Roundel
Ten syllables per line; refrain: five syllables
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1 To 14 lines Contest

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Karen Croft Date: 1/13/2022 7:49:00 PM beautiful! what a way with words. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 11/23/2021 8:21:00 AM I stay awestruck before your poetic excellence.... no exaggeration ! Proud of you ! Login to Reply

Al Juman Date: 11/3/2021 3:08:00 PM Excellent write my friend well crafted Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/16/2021 4:42:00 PM very good writing in this form! I really like this one, Vijay! Congrats on your win I see you got too. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/12/2021 7:16:00 AM Went for a blind pick on your list Vijay, came across this gem, love it. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 8/26/2021 3:41:00 PM WoW! Vijay, This is so beautiful and well written. It's so romantic as well. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Ann Foster Date: 8/16/2021 1:52:00 PM Lovely... Ann Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/12/2021 6:01:00 PM A sweet fairy romance! Lovely words, Vijay! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 8/12/2021 2:10:00 PM Vijay, i see congratulations with this intense splendorous write were due before you actually got them, I could of said, well I knew this would be a win! A cute romantic fairy write! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/11/2021 7:45:00 AM Congratulations, Vijay! A lovely poem! BW ~ Mala Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/11/2021 3:42:00 PM Thank you Mala--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/11/2021 6:56:00 AM Gloriously romantic, my dearest friend, Vijay! I adore it! Blessings. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/11/2021 3:42:00 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.

Joseph May Date: 8/11/2021 6:40:00 AM You did the form well Vijay, Best for a top win... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/11/2021 3:41:00 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/10/2021 2:37:00 AM Enjoyed this well written roundel, Vijay:) beautiful fairy dream:) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2021 6:00:00 AM Thank you Jo. Much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/9/2021 3:41:00 PM You have me spinning in circles here, well delivered roundel , :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2021 6:00:00 AM Thank you Vienna--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/9/2021 11:03:00 AM - So beautiful, Vijay ... the lines flow like a magical dream :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2021 2:35:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Heidi Sands Date: 8/9/2021 4:26:00 AM Oh, I enjoyed this so much. It is inspiring, uplifting and brings such happiness. ! Very well written. A Fave for me. I hope you have a beautiful day :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2021 5:37:00 AM That is so wonderful to hear from you, Heidi. Glad you liked the poem. You are the expert in this form (Poetry Soup says that)--so I am honored to receive a FAVE from you. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile Date: 8/9/2021 4:24:00 AM Romance flows like midnight mist in your dreamy piece Vijay! I thoroughly enjoyed it !! Good Luck !!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2021 5:34:00 AM Glad to hear that Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 8/9/2021 4:09:00 AM This reads so well, romantic and beautiful it makes the heart smile...Delice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2021 5:33:00 AM Glad you enjoyed the words, Delice. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/9/2021 1:57:00 AM Incredibly beautiful rondel, There's romance and passion in every stanza. An incredible beautiful rondel. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2021 5:32:00 AM I appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many many thanks.

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/9/2021 12:18:00 AM A very romantic verse Vijay, you write about romance so well. If it's for a contest good luck. Hope you're well. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2021 5:32:00 AM So very kind of you Tom. Thank you for being there for everyone. Much appreciate as always.

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/8/2021 6:55:00 PM Vijay, this is SO lovely and sweet. Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2021 5:31:00 AM Thank you Janice. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole Date: 8/8/2021 5:49:00 PM "Spanning love wings, you uplift me!" And that is how it should be. This is so beautiful and dreamy. Your words whisper sweet romance, with a hint of passion. I am smiling. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2021 5:30:00 AM Always a joy to read your feedback, Brandy. Much appreciate your smile my friend. Many thanks.