Vijay Pandit Poet Roundel

My Sweet Fairy Dream

My sweet fairy dream, blossoms of my glee,
In your embrace unfold desires of night
When donning bold smile you answer my plea
My sweet fairy dream

Oh! how you paint splendorous day so bright
On blue morning skies for romance to spree
Where parable of sweethearts passions write

Blazing with glory where sun greets the sea
While golden arc glimmers in mauve delight
Spanning love wings, oh, how you uplift me!
My sweet fairy dream

August 8, 2021
Form: Roundel
Ten syllables per line; refrain: five syllables
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1 To 14 lines Contest

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Karen Croft January 13, 2022 at 7:49 PM beautiful! what a way with words.

Valsa George November 23, 2021 at 8:21 AM I stay awestruck before your poetic excellence.... no exaggeration ! Proud of you !

Al Juman November 3, 2021 at 3:08 PM Excellent write my friend well crafted

Andrea Dietrich September 16, 2021 at 4:42 PM very good writing in this form! I really like this one, Vijay! Congrats on your win I see you got too.

Harry Horsman September 12, 2021 at 7:16 AM Went for a blind pick on your list Vijay, came across this gem, love it.

Alexis Y. August 26, 2021 at 3:41 PM WoW! Vijay, This is so beautiful and well written. It's so romantic as well. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Ann Foster August 16, 2021 at 1:52 PM Lovely... Ann

Kim Rodrigues August 12, 2021 at 6:01 PM A sweet fairy romance! Lovely words, Vijay!

Jennifer Proxenos August 12, 2021 at 2:10 PM Vijay, i see congratulations with this intense splendorous write were due before you actually got them, I could of said, well I knew this would be a win! A cute romantic fairy write! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 11, 2021 at 7:45 AM Congratulations, Vijay! A lovely poem! BW ~ Mala Vijay Pandit August 11, 2021 at 3:42 PM Thank you Mala--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 11, 2021 at 6:56 AM Gloriously romantic, my dearest friend, Vijay! I adore it! Blessings. Vijay Pandit August 11, 2021 at 3:42 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.

Joseph May August 11, 2021 at 6:40 AM You did the form well Vijay, Best for a top win... Vijay Pandit August 11, 2021 at 3:41 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Joanna Daniel August 10, 2021 at 2:37 AM Enjoyed this well written roundel, Vijay:) beautiful fairy dream:) Vijay Pandit August 10, 2021 at 6:00 AM Thank you Jo. Much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose August 9, 2021 at 3:41 PM You have me spinning in circles here, well delivered roundel , :) Vijay Pandit August 10, 2021 at 6:00 AM Thank you Vienna--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2021 at 11:03 AM - So beautiful, Vijay ... the lines flow like a magical dream :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit August 9, 2021 at 2:35 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Heidi Sands August 9, 2021 at 4:26 AM Oh, I enjoyed this so much. It is inspiring, uplifting and brings such happiness. ! Very well written. A Fave for me. I hope you have a beautiful day :) Vijay Pandit August 9, 2021 at 5:37 AM That is so wonderful to hear from you, Heidi. Glad you liked the poem. You are the expert in this form (Poetry Soup says that)--so I am honored to receive a FAVE from you. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile August 9, 2021 at 4:24 AM Romance flows like midnight mist in your dreamy piece Vijay! I thoroughly enjoyed it !! Good Luck !!! Vijay Pandit August 9, 2021 at 5:34 AM Glad to hear that Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Delice Arleen Skelly August 9, 2021 at 4:09 AM This reads so well, romantic and beautiful it makes the heart smile...Delice Vijay Pandit August 9, 2021 at 5:33 AM Glad you enjoyed the words, Delice. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar August 9, 2021 at 1:57 AM Incredibly beautiful rondel, There's romance and passion in every stanza. An incredible beautiful rondel. Vijay Pandit August 9, 2021 at 5:32 AM I appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many many thanks.

Tom Cunningham August 9, 2021 at 12:18 AM A very romantic verse Vijay, you write about romance so well. If it's for a contest good luck. Hope you're well. Tom Vijay Pandit August 9, 2021 at 5:32 AM So very kind of you Tom. Thank you for being there for everyone. Much appreciate as always.

Janice Canerdy August 8, 2021 at 6:55 PM Vijay, this is SO lovely and sweet. Janice Vijay Pandit August 9, 2021 at 5:31 AM Thank you Janice. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole August 8, 2021 at 5:49 PM "Spanning love wings, you uplift me!" And that is how it should be. This is so beautiful and dreamy. Your words whisper sweet romance, with a hint of passion. I am smiling. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit August 9, 2021 at 5:30 AM Always a joy to read your feedback, Brandy. Much appreciate your smile my friend. Many thanks.