My Sunshine Heart and Moonlight Love

Good morning my sunshine of heart
How glorious you look this morning
Bright and shining nothing can compare
You give me joy my heart is light

Your warm touch gives me that feeling
That always makes things better
You banish all that darkens my thoughts
I am light on my feet I can fly

Good evening my moonlight love 
I sail into the dark smiling and knowing
You my moonlight love will be there waiting 
to embrace me with your glowing love

I lean forward and kiss you
The shimmering light of your love
Surrounds us as our lips touch
My heart radiates like the sun 

Your smile is my light 
It chases my dark clouds away 
No longer do I fear the dark 
For your brilliance surrounds me

In this life we love and live together
None can do us apart 
Close your eyes I am here
My sunshine heart and moonlight love 


 Collaboration with Edward McCall
            8-23-17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/8/2017 11:42:00 AM
A lovely touching write.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 11/9/2017 3:52:00 PM
Thank you James... hugs :)
Date: 9/6/2017 8:35:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration..
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Akkina Downing
Date: 9/6/2017 10:42:00 AM
You just made me smile, and we thank you Silent One... hugs and smiles :)
Date: 8/29/2017 7:08:00 PM
Very romantic couplet collab, Akkina and Edward. Beautifully expressed. Love the title of this sumptuous write. Enjoyed the read immensely. Stellar poetry! An instant fave. Love and joy always.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/29/2017 8:22:00 PM
Edward and I are so grateful for this beautiful comment no fave dearest friend Freddie. Thank you so much... hugs and love always :)
Date: 8/27/2017 10:14:00 PM
I can see the love.... great collaboration.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2017 8:30:00 PM
you're welcome my talented friend.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/28/2017 4:49:00 AM
We thank you so much dear Pashang. Always great to hear from you :)
Date: 8/26/2017 2:48:00 PM
ohh, how you enthrall with such sentimental lines, akkina and edward... i like!..huggs
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/26/2017 5:31:00 PM
Edward and I thank you so much for this lovely visit and sweet comment Miss Nette. Thank you...Hugs :)
Date: 8/25/2017 10:52:00 PM
Akkina and Edward, your title and your poem's last line make a nice sandwich for the creamy filling inside.., a deliciously sweet romantic poem, a beautiful indulgence that I feasted on and had to read again for a second helping! Lol! A great write and a scrumptious collaboration you two! :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/26/2017 8:49:00 PM
Akkina, even your replies are blissfully poetic. Have a great tonight and tomorrow my friend. Many thanks and appreciation for your talent and your beautiful heart :)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/26/2017 5:29:00 PM
Susan Susan my lovely friend, thank you so much for this sweet and delicious comment. Edward and I really appreciate very much... hugs from us to you my lady friend :)
Date: 8/25/2017 9:29:00 AM
Akkina, this is just beautiful poetry and it described a beautiful....around the clock romance! 7 my best, chuck
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/25/2017 12:24:00 PM
Edward and I thank you chuck for such a kind comment :)
Date: 8/25/2017 12:27:00 AM
Oh what a lovely line here "My sunshine heart and Moonlight love'. I see this is a collaboration, and what an excellent job you two have done wonderful, and a fave Akkina and Edward...Maria xx
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/25/2017 5:31:00 AM
You honor us my dear friend. Thank you so much, with all my heart... love always :)
Date: 8/24/2017 9:09:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem Akkina..Well penned..
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/24/2017 9:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph...hugs :)
Date: 8/24/2017 8:24:00 PM
The title drew me in, what a beautiful poem, and great collab!
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/24/2017 8:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Arthur. We greatly appreciate your lovely comment...hugs :)
Date: 8/24/2017 4:05:00 PM
A beautiful expression of love so personified - Well done Akkina!!
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/24/2017 4:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael... hugs :)
Date: 8/24/2017 10:19:00 AM
Hi Akkina, a wonderful write coming from you pens as a seamless whole. Love always draws me in and when it is so well written i am in Heaven. Congratulations to you both on this wonderful poem. Has to be a fave. HUgs....Mike. XX
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/24/2017 12:12:00 PM
You do us honor Mike. We thank you very much, it means a lot...hugs :)
Date: 8/24/2017 8:48:00 AM
Bravo poets!...just bravo...applause, applause...god bless...^WW^
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/24/2017 9:12:00 AM
Smiling pink here. Lol! Thank you ^WW^... always you made me smile with your sweet and lovely comments, and I truly appreciate you dear friend. Hugs :)
Date: 8/23/2017 2:02:00 PM
- Beautiful from both of you ... a pleasure to read with sunshine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/23/2017 2:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, Edward and I both appreciate your lovely comment... hugs and smile dear friend :)
Date: 8/23/2017 9:06:00 AM
A beautiful tango of words... seamless gutters
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/23/2017 12:48:00 PM
We thank you so much Tim for this lovely comment. Appreciate very much... hugs :)
Date: 8/23/2017 6:45:00 AM
A well written, beautiful tribute to sunshine and moonlight intertwined with love and life--well done Akkina!
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/23/2017 12:44:00 PM
Edward and I thank you Vijay... hugs :)
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