My Sunshine Heart and Moonlight Love

Good morning my sunshine of heart
How glorious you look this morning
Bright and shining nothing can compare
You give me joy my heart is light

Your warm touch gives me that feeling
That always makes things better
You banish all that darkens my thoughts
I am light on my feet I can fly

Good evening my moonlight love 
I sail into the dark smiling and knowing
You my moonlight love will be there waiting 
to embrace me with your glowing love

I lean forward and kiss you
The shimmering light of your love
Surrounds us as our lips touch
My heart radiates like the sun 

Your smile is my light 
It chases my dark clouds away 
No longer do I fear the dark 
For your brilliance surrounds me

In this life we love and live together
None can do us apart 
Close your eyes I am here
My sunshine heart and moonlight love 


 Collaboration with Edward McCall
            8-23-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 11:42 AM
A lovely touching write.
Downing  Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Thank you James... hugs :)
One Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Beautiful collaboration..
Downing  Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 10:42 AM
You just made me smile, and we thank you Silent One... hugs and smiles :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Very romantic couplet collab, Akkina and Edward. Beautifully expressed. Love the title of this sumptuous write. Enjoyed the read immensely. Stellar poetry! An instant fave. Love and joy always.
Downing  Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Edward and I are so grateful for this beautiful comment no fave dearest friend Freddie. Thank you so much... hugs and love always :)
Salehi Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 10:14 PM
I can see the love.... great collaboration.
Salehi Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 8:30 PM
you're welcome my talented friend.
Downing  Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 4:49 AM
We thank you so much dear Pashang. Always great to hear from you :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 2:48 PM
ohh, how you enthrall with such sentimental lines, akkina and edward... i like!..huggs
Downing  Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Edward and I thank you so much for this lovely visit and sweet comment Miss Nette. Thank you...Hugs :)
Ashley Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 10:52 PM
Akkina and Edward, your title and your poem's last line make a nice sandwich for the creamy filling inside.., a deliciously sweet romantic poem, a beautiful indulgence that I feasted on and had to read again for a second helping! Lol! A great write and a scrumptious collaboration you two! :)
Ashley Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Akkina, even your replies are blissfully poetic. Have a great tonight and tomorrow my friend. Many thanks and appreciation for your talent and your beautiful heart :)
Downing  Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Susan Susan my lovely friend, thank you so much for this sweet and delicious comment. Edward and I really appreciate very much... hugs from us to you my lady friend :)
Melugin Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Akkina, this is just beautiful poetry and it described a beautiful....around the clock romance! 7 my best, chuck
Downing  Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 12:24 PM
Edward and I thank you chuck for such a kind comment :)
Williams Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 12:27 AM
Oh what a lovely line here "My sunshine heart and Moonlight love'. I see this is a collaboration, and what an excellent job you two have done wonderful, and a fave Akkina and Edward...Maria xx
Downing  Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:31 AM
You honor us my dear friend. Thank you so much, with all my heart... love always :)
May Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Such a beautiful poem Akkina..Well penned..
Downing  Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 9:17 PM
Thank you so much Joseph...hugs :)
Vaso Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:24 PM
The title drew me in, what a beautiful poem, and great collab!
Downing  Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:33 PM
Thank you so much Arthur. We greatly appreciate your lovely comment...hugs :)
Bell Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 4:05 PM
A beautiful expression of love so personified - Well done Akkina!!
Downing  Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Thank you so much Michael... hugs :)
Raven Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Hi Akkina, a wonderful write coming from you pens as a seamless whole. Love always draws me in and when it is so well written i am in Heaven. Congratulations to you both on this wonderful poem. Has to be a fave. HUgs....Mike. XX
Downing  Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 12:12 PM
You do us honor Mike. We thank you very much, it means a lot...hugs :)
Warrior Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Bravo poets!...just bravo...applause, applause...god bless...^WW^
Downing  Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Smiling pink here. Lol! Thank you ^WW^... always you made me smile with your sweet and lovely comments, and I truly appreciate you dear friend. Hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 2:02 PM
- Beautiful from both of you ... a pleasure to read with sunshine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 2:57 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, Edward and I both appreciate your lovely comment... hugs and smile dear friend :)
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 9:06 AM
A beautiful tango of words... seamless gutters
Downing  Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 12:48 PM
We thank you so much Tim for this lovely comment. Appreciate very much... hugs :)
Pandit Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:45 AM
A well written, beautiful tribute to sunshine and moonlight intertwined with love and life--well done Akkina!
Downing  Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Edward and I thank you Vijay... hugs :)
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