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My Sunshine

Good morning Sunshine I woke before you To anticipate your glorious entrance You have not disappointed Your radiance is even more brilliant than yesterday And once again, you take my breath away And so much so that I almost forgot How magnificent you drifted off to sleep last night As you were closing your eyes to rest Only a glimmer of your daylight glory remained Yet it was enough to move me Enough to make everything around me spectacular Both sky and sea, how you calm me And once again you take my breath away Morning to morning I wait for you And cherish the bright path you make for me A divine trail that leads to my heart’s door Let me in, you say, in whispered tone Oh, how your voice beckons my soul Your pen scrolls speechless beauty I am lost in your words, completely taken Enraptured and overcome by your poetry And once again you take my breath away Almond eyed, island girl You alone, will always be My Sunshine -Lyric Man Note: Just wanted to try my hand at Free Verse and hopefully with a bit of a romantic twist I hope you enjoy. I needed inspiration and I found it in Sunshine!

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Date: 7/28/2020 5:38:00 AM
Looking for some sunshine and found it in this poem, refreshing and optimistic wit rays of hope, nicely penned
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Date: 10/17/2019 7:33:00 PM
You penned this perfectly, inked sunshine my friend. Blessings Rick. Thanks for your visit. ;0)
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Date: 10/1/2019 9:39:00 PM
Your thoughts are so dreamy and romantic. "And once again you take my breath away" Indeed you do, with your beautiful words. Simply breathtaking Lyric Man. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/1/2019 5:35:00 PM
I'm in love with all this sweetness in your free verse..You're so good at it..I love it .Love your metaphoric ways..Lovely David.
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Date: 9/27/2019 10:21:00 PM
Amazing and awesome... Love this. You did it wonderfully. God bless you
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Date: 9/26/2019 4:56:00 PM
This is so nice! I love it :)
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Date: 9/26/2019 4:33:00 PM
aww LM you have not lost your touch my friend and have brought sunshine into our day with your lovely poem and yes there is that hint of romance:-) hugs jan xx
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