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My Summer Love

My sunshine in the morning wakens me with eyes that twinkle mischief and delight. My sunflower whose gaze I love to see is he – my summer love – from morn to night! I'm his honeybee, and he's my daisy. He’s the sweetest sweet pea of early June! A snapdragon, he can make me crazy. But when he is the reddest rose, I swoon! His dulcet voice, like the song of blue birds, is also like the the breeze of summer skies when days are fair. I love to to hear the words he whispers as he watches me with eyes like sun-lit oceans. My dear marigold! Forever his, my heart he’ll ever hold. May 17, 2021 for John Hamilton's Summer Love Sonnet Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/25/2021 6:20:00 AM
Romantic allegory even one averse to summer can appreciate, why...congrats
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Date: 5/24/2021 8:19:00 AM
Written with your vivacious trademark flair, Andrea! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/24/2021 8:12:00 AM
Eyes that twinkle mischief and delight, love your unique word choices, that's what I was hoping for. Thanks Andrea for your entry and congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 5/23/2021 4:45:00 PM
This is a beautiful love of nature sonnet Andrea that extols the beauty of flowers. Your sonnets hold imagery that is so breathtaking. I hope John likes this as much as I do. Bravo! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/20/2021 8:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading about your romantic summer love Andrea :)
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Date: 5/19/2021 6:43:00 PM
So sweet and romantic Andrea... with beautiful imagery... just found some time to read some poems and comment... I hope this will place high... Have a great day... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 5/18/2021 7:32:00 PM
A stellar and most beautifully wrought romantic sonnet my great friend! Flow, imagery , depth and exquisite verses sing!~ A fav .. God bless..
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Date: 5/18/2021 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Andrea with strong hints of romance. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 5/18/2021 8:36:00 AM
Lovely romantic piece Andrea, so well-tuned poetically to fill one's heart with love. Great stuff!
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Date: 5/18/2021 2:38:00 AM
Wow! Andrea, yours flows so smoothly, I had quite a struggle with mine, Dulcinea:)
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Date: 5/18/2021 2:10:00 AM
I feel as if I'm in a garden and read this poem twice to taste the honey of these wonderful flowers.
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Date: 5/18/2021 12:14:00 AM
A gorgeous and sensual floral affair! Wow! Beautiful Andrea.
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Date: 5/17/2021 8:15:00 PM
Your lines glow in the breezes of the warm season. Exquisite, unique voices of devotion! wish I will be a win
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Date: 5/17/2021 6:04:00 PM
Sounds like one beautiful summer afaire du coeur. Winning wishes dear friend ,:)
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Date: 5/17/2021 3:06:00 PM
A lovely, yet playful, love sonnet masterfully written. Reads like a winner:) Good luck, Andrea.
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Date: 5/17/2021 2:03:00 PM
Your verses shine in summer breeze. Wonderful voices of love!
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